Something Missing

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CallMeNoona, Aug 22, 2011.

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    Ahh... I love Teacher and Student romances... I'm the reincarnation of the pedobear, second generation. 






    But teachers in reality are fugly. 
     
  2. Wow your a really good author!!!!
     
  3. thank you! 
     
  4. U should write books I would read them!!!!!
     
  5. Seconds past before he pushed me away. Mr.Cartier's face was red, and my own now felt very hot! Oh dear God!! I had just mistook him as Mackenzie and... k-kissed him!
    "K-Katherine..." he said quietly.
    "I'm so sorry!" I shouted. "I um... I mistook you as... no..." I stammered looking for the right words to say.
    "You mistook me as Mackenzie... is that what you're trying to say?" he asked.
    "Yes... When you first walked up here, I seriously thought you were Mackenzie! I'm so sorry I made such a stupid mistake!" I said. I had an odd feeling that it was going to be awkward between us, but he stood upband smiled.
    "Not at all. It's not like you like ne or anything, right?" he asked heplung me to my feet.
    "No of course not!" I said.
    "Haha. An honest mistake is what it was!" he laughed.
    An honest mistake?! Where the hell was this guy from?! I just kissed him and he doesn't even care that it happened... not that I care! but SERIOUSLY?! And honest mistake?
    "Haha! Yes an honest mistake..." I grumbled.
    He smiled at me. "Well I have to head back, my last morning class is about to begin," he said opening the stairway door. Before he left he looked back at me.
    "Hey! Katherine!"
    "Yeah?"
    "Don't go falling in love with me, okay?" he asked. He then smiled again and left.
    I watched him leave. Of course I would never fall in live with him!
     
  6. haha yeah!!! And I can't believe I spelled *love* wrong there.... DAMN IT!!!! 
     
  7.  It's ok. It's hard to type on iPhone. I think you're doing a great job! I have at least four typos in an update but wtf. 
     
  8. Haha thanks!!
     
  9. Omg, she is so going to fall for him!!
     
  10. Update! I want more!
     
  11. we want lots more! More more more more more! Update update update update!!
     
  12. Update now please!!!!!!
     
  13. "Your face looks terrible," laughed Mr.Cartier. "Have you been crying AGAIN?" he asked a smirk appearing on his lips.
    We were eating lunch together in his classroom.
    "Shut up!" I shouted. "And no I have not!" I shot back at him. I shoved an apple piece into my mouth.
    "You are so stubborn!" he laughed.
    "What do you mean?!"
    "Haha, no it's nothing, nevermind," he said taking a sip of his coffee. He looked over at me.
    "What?" I asked, glaring.
    "When will you come to my class? It's been a whole week of school and you haven't come."
    "I'll go tomorrow," I said bluntly.
    "TOMORROW'S SATURDAY!!" he shouted angrily. He sighed. "You really are just naturally stupid."
    "Hey! Shut up! At least I came to eat with you today!" I shouted.
    "Yeah I guess that deserves some bonus points," he laughed.
    "Bonus points?" I asked.
    "Haha nevermind," he said. "Just come to my class alright? I can't let you skip all year."
    "Like I'm going to do that! I'll go on Monday!"
    "You better!" he said smiling. "Hey Katherine..."
    "Yeah?"
    "Are you busy this weekend?" he asked.
    "No... Why?"
    "I want to take you somewhere, if you don't mind," he said taking another sip of coffee.
    I couldn't believe my ears! Did he ask me out on a date?!
     
  14.  more please~
     
  15. "You want to take me somewhere?" I asked. My heart felt like it was going to burst.
    "Yeah. Not as a date or anything, I just... I want to show you something. You will probably be suprised. But I think it's for the best.
    My heart ached in pain for some reason and I looked away from him before answering. "S-sure," I said.
    "Okay, give me your number so I can call you, and here's mine just in case," he said and he passed over a piece of paper.
    I gave him mine, and immeadiatly felt flustered. My teacher has my phone number! That was all that was going through my mind.
    "Great, I'll call you sometime this weekend. Well classes are starting so hurry up and get to class," he said as the bell rang.
    "Uh... yeah," I said quickly before throwing the rest of my lunch out and running out the door.

    Not a date... This will not be a date. I kept reminding myself. It was Sunday now, and I waited by the phone and waited for that one call.
    Riiiinngg!!
    I answered quickly... TOO quickly.
    "H-hello?!" I said nearly shouting.
    "Haha. Wow that was a fast pick up! Were you waiting by the phone by chance?" Mr.Cartier asked mockingly.
    "Shut up! And no I wasn't!" I shouted angrily.
    "I was kidding. Anyways, are you okay and ready to go out today? Like 4:00... Maybe?"
    "Um... yes!" I said looking at the clock. It was 3:30pm.
    "Alright, I'll pick you up then. See you later," he said.
    "Bye," I said hanging up.
    My heart beat fast in my chest. I couldn't wait!