I just realized something.... I made a huge mistake!!! I meant for Mackenzie to have been dead for 4 years not 3 and also.... I said Mr.Cartier had grey eyes and dark hair (almost black) and that he looked like Mackenzie... but in the first part i wrote that Mackenzie had brown hair and blue eyes fail....
Moar? Katie, the only Kate better than you is Kate Mosse (No, not the model), the writer of Labrynth... And that book is only barely beaten by Ender's Game and the Riders of Pern series... That's how good you are, so make more, re-write it with extra detail, find a publisher, and then BECOME SUPER FAMOUS AND THANK US ON WORLDWIDE TELEVISION! ... Lol, maybe you don't need to do that last bit
He drove me to the front of the school. It wasn't a beautiful private school like my other one but it was fairly big and it looked nice. I sighed. "Well... hopefully it's going to be fun..." I muttered. "I hope no one hates me." "Haha. I don't think anyone's going to hate you," laughed Mr.Cartier. He leaned over and kissed the top of my head. "Now get out of my car!" he said jokingly. I smiled and stepped out. I watched as he drove away and took a deep breath before entering the school premises. People were staring at me and whispering. Damn... I had hoped I wouldn't be the centre of attention... "Hey there hottie, wanna take a tour with my around the school. I'll make it fun," said a teenage boy with blonde hair and blue eyes. "You know yer kinda pretty, where you from?" "Um... no," I rejected. I wasn't sure how to handle this. I had never had a boy my age flirt with me before... it was different. "And I'm from... Ohio," I lied. "Well it was nice meeting you," I said and I quickly brushed past him and into the school. "Hey. You're new..." I jumped. I whipped my head around to the kid who had startled me. He was a puny kid, a few inches taker than me. He had brownish hair and hazel eyes. He wore glasses an was kind of cute. "Ah haha... yeah I am. I don't really know where I'm going!" I admitted and laughed. He laughed too. "Well if you want I can give you a short tour before classes start, it won't take long," he offered. "Alright." "Okay then," he said and he started walking and he gestured for me to follow. After the tour I was quite confident where I was to he going and smiled at him. "Thanks," I said. "Oh by the way I'm Katherine Revant," I said holding my hand out to him. He took it an shook it. "Jason Clarke," he said. "Wait... any relation to the owner and CEO of Revant Industries? Doesn't he have a daughter named Katherine too?" My face flushed. Oh sh*t! "Haha... no, not even close. I don't even know who that is!" I laughed nervously. "Oh. I see. Well that would've been cool." "Yeah... It definitely would..." I said quietly. "That's a laugh... me being the precious daughter of a family like that! I'm sorry, but I have to go," I said and I ran off. Tears steamed my cheeks. "Hey you okay?" I turned to see a man with dark hair and grey eyes. My breath overtook me and I began to hyperventilate. This boy was much more of a resemblance to Mackenzie than anyone! Even Mr.Cartier. "You..." I whispered.