He smiled at me. "So you still love him, don't you?" he asked. "Somehow I knew you still did but I wasn't sure." I looked away in shame. "Yes. I do still love him. But he's dead, he won't ever come back, I've known that for a long time now... But I love you too... maybe even more. So please... don't be angry with me." "I'm not angry at all. If you still love him then that's great. It means he has influenced you greatly and he is a part of you. It's nothing I can be mad about. He made you the way you are now and I love you because of it. It may be selfish to say that perhaps it might've been a good thing that he... died..." I couldn't help but smile a bit. He was right. If Mackenzie hadn't died, Mr.Cartier and I would never have met." "I'm sorry... Was that terrible of me to say that?" "No. You're right. If he hadn't of died, I would never have met you. And I would never have fallen in love with you and that seems very sad to me." He smiled. "I'm glad to hear you agree," he said leaning over to me. He softly kissed my lips. "I love you." "I love you too," I said smiling. "Okay, get dressed you have school in a half hour!" he said and he shooed me off his bed. I laughed. "Alright! Can you drive me today?" I asked. "If you hurry up!" he said. I raced into my bedroom and put on something nice then raced into the bathroom. When I came out I had done my hair, teeth and make up! I was all set. "I'm ready to go!" I said. When Mr.Cartier came out I laughed. "You're not wearing that are you?" I asked. He was wearing a formal suit and his hair was nicely combed instead of the usual untidiness. "Well... it's my first day..." "You sound like a kindergartener yourself. Go change and then we can go!" I laughed. He smiled. "Haha okay."
It's nice, the way you word things isn't at all like Anastasia. And I think you kept their personalities consistent. They weren't talking controversial.
LOVE LOVE LOVEE!!! UPDATE MOREEEE I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS AT SCHOOL!! wow, i just realized how much i sound like a little kid
Haha that's because Anastasia and Katherine are totally different!! Anastasia is shy and very socially awkward where as Katherine is not so much like that (anymore lol)