Something Missing

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CallMeNoona, Aug 22, 2011.

  1. @Goldia
    @Katie: =3
     
  2. Guys, I meant in her name- I'm not looking to be a fan fic author, just want to share this with others.
     
  3. STILL NO. :mad:


    THAT'S STORY THEFT.
     
  4. write morrreeee i love this storryyy!!! u shld be an authorrrr!!! i wuld totally read ur books!!
     
  5. That was amazing I wish it was a full book cause I would read it 1,000 times you my friend have a talent!!!!
     
  6. Omg!!! I am so sorry guys! The boarding school I am at is having trouble with the wifi so it keeps coming on and off!! The longest the wifi has stayed is only two minutes and it's gone!! But they're fixing it so I'm sure it'll be all good soon!!! 
     
  7. "Katherine? Did it go well?" asked Josh. "You look like you cried for hours," he said taking note of my extremely red face.

    "It went fine. And yes I cried for a while," I said. "Where's Jillian?" I asked. "Isn't she always with you? You two seem to be getting really close," I teased.

    "Haha. She had to go photocopy something for the student council meeting at lunch so she left. I am trying really hard to get her to notice me. I mean I really like her and I want to ask her out but it's kind of hard."

    "Just ask her."

    "I'm just scared she'll say no. I mean what if she does?!"

    "Then keep trying. If the one you love rejects you... just keep trying. I'm sure one day he'll accept you and your feelings..." I said quietly.

    "He?" asked Josh.

    "Haha! It's nothing. Keep trying Josh and I'm sure everything will turn out great!" I said turning and leaving.

    "But I haven't even asked her!" he shouted.

    I quickly went to Mr.Cartier's class. Crap... I was late. I opened the door and walked in.

    "I'm sorry I'm late," I apologized.

    "Miss Revant you know I don't like when my students are late. Please take your seat and come in at lunch, you have detention. I'm not putting up with this 'I'm sorry I'm late' scenario anymore, do you understand?"

    "Yes Mr.Cartier," I replied and I immediately went to my seat. He was treating me like a normal student. Had my words affected him this soon already?"

    "Hey that's her," whispered a girl behind me. "That's the girl who I saw confess to Mr.Cartier. Haha he totally rejected her!"

    "Really? That's her?! What a stupid thing to do! Why would you ask out a teacher, and Mr.Cartier no less? Doesn't she know how popular he is amongst the female student body?"

    "What a joke right?"

    "I'm sure he can do way better. But didn't you hear he was dating Alanna of class C? She's a student isn't she?"

    "Oh yeah. I heard about that! She's much prettier than Katherine! That slut should just piss off and go away because no one wants..."

    "SHUT UP!!" I shouted. I stood up and turned at the two girls. "What the hell do you two know?! Nothing! I love Mr.Cartier and he..."

    "Katherine!" Mr.Cartier grabbed me from behind and held me close as I cried. "Shhh... It's okay. What happened here?" he demanded. He glared at the two girls.

    "Nothing," relied one of them.

    "Yeah nothing!"

    "Well fine. But for now you two are dismissed, leave the classroom please." he waited for the two of them to leave before dismissing the rest of the class fifteen minutes early.

    "What happened?" he asked me.

    "It's none of your business," I told him. "I'd rather not tell you what people are saying."

    "It is my business because you are my student. Tell me. What did they say to you. Or what did they tell you? Anything about Alanna?" he asked.

    "So it is true! I'm sorry..."

    "What?"

    "I'm sorry! I didn't know you were in love with someone else! Please forgive me! I've been so cruel to you! I'm sorry!" I sobbed running out of his classroom.
     
  8. Bump! I want more!!! :)
     
  9. I have a question, are you trying to kill us with a cliff hanger?
     
  10. Haha maayybeee 