The ToU also states that if there is posts about me, I can continue to post. Your post and sami's most recent post was referring to me. Therefore, I have the right. I told y'all that I wasnt trying to be mean. Do you not understand that? You are saying things that hurt other peoples feelings and most likely your reputation. By me saying this, I'm not saying that I haven't done so also, so do not go off again when I am clearly stating the facts, not trying to cause drama or be rude towards any of you. Thanks. <3Taylorr
Read my wall Sami. Asterisks = bad words. Bad words toward another player = harassment. Harassment = silence.
You were being rude to her first I don't blame her for being mean back so really just leave her and this thread alone
Okay lets get this straight, by you replying to me telling you to leave, wont solve the problem. So do us all a favor and please leave, this is my thread and i would appreciate you to get off, thanks.
Pear and Sami. I'm not here to cause trouble. I've stated that multiple times prior to this. I was reading a very good story that I enjoined, I made a comment, and now hell has broken loose between you and I. That wasn't my intention when I made that comment. But it was obviously taken offensively. You calling me names? Hardly trying to solve the problem. And pear, how was I being rude to her first? Exactly. I would like quotes if you can give them to me. I'll be the bigger person. I'm sorry if the comment I made was taken the wrong way. Best of luck on you're story. I'll be lurking
Well thanks, but you know what you are partly right i must say, i apologize for calling you a bitch , it was uncalled for. But making that comment was also uncalled for. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, if there is a rest of the story, but please if you leave a comment- dont make it rude danksss.
I'm not trying to take sides... But all Taylor was saying is that it sounded like another story..... I like this story, dont get me wrong, but no need to overreact
I have TIPS on your story so don't get freaking off the walls when I share my TIPS! Numbro Uno: More details actually make the reader WANT to read. Numbro Dos: Lead up to something. Within six posts they were already kissing. Too fast if you ask me. Numbro Tres: Don't use a lot of speech! (Not saying you are) This is something my writing teacher has always told me. Numbro Cuatro: Give the character descriptions. Like what you did with Rose. Only do that with all of them. Numbro Cinco: Make the character have life and feelings. Numbro Seis: When in another POV please add what they think about it all. Numbro Siete: Add space between speech. Ex. Rose was the most prettiest girl in the school. Of course I was jealous, but she was a huge slut. What did Tyler see in her anyways? "Move out of my way, twerp," Rose shoved me into the wall. I have to say she was a big bitch. Numbro Ocho: When you add a character don't just talk about them once and never bring them up again. Add them into more scenes tie them into the story. Or don't even think about making that character. Remember these are JUST TIPS! Peace out noobs.
I need to add to TIP seis: Ex.2 "Hey," Jess said. "What's up?" Reagin replied. "Makin' hot chocolate!" Jess said extremely excited with a hence of being tired. NOMBRE NUEVE: use descriptions language. Similes, hyperboles, metaphors, personification, ect. Much lovee Ash
Sorry everyone, Im stopping the story, to much haters and complaints, so you know what.? All you people who think its horrible, congrats cuz im done with this damn story on your behalf. Noobs who think they know everything, hop off this thread an go write your own story- its not gonna be perfect like you think. And for all you who dont know, im young- i was doing this for fun as an inspiration from rosie. Shes much better. This was for fun just messing around. My FIRST story. So leave me alone please. Sorry for people who actually cared, Thanks Sami.
Good story, keep it up! Don't worry what people say, just, give it your all. Just a tip: try and format it a little better, that way it's all nice and spaced out and looks boss! Peace!
I gave you my tips so you can write more stories and get more followers NO ONE was hating. Grow up and take criticism I get you're young but so am I. All we're trying to do it help so you have more skill. One more tip... NUMBRO ONCE: DON'T EVER GIVE UP! Keep writing and you'll get more followers if people don't like it they won't comment. You're not going to find haters in Fan fic., only people that'll help you.
Lol... Sami, no one is hating. I'm sorry if you think this is me "Hating", but it's not. Continue writing. Don't go dramatic. And sis- I'm pretty sure you skipped diez haha. And it's "numero" not "numbro"... That's not even a word... And can you talk to Justin? He's being a weirdo and won't talk to me or something.