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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Knight, Jul 8, 2012.

  1. Bump for my good buddy Alexwho obviously is a talented writer
     
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    I was sitting on the park bench when he came walking toward me. I just watched as he came forward, I didn't know who he was but he seemed familiar but I didn't know why I just couldn't think straight when I felt bad about what I did to Christine.


    "Hello son" the man said to me as he walked toward me "you grown up so much since I last saw you "


    I looked at him in shock. I just didn't know what to say. "f-fa-father…" I said as I looked at him. There was no word to explain how I felt all I can said was that I was in shock,terrified and excited.


    "Son do you still want info on that girl named Christine?" he said to me as he sat next to me. "sorry to say this but that girl is or should I say was your best friend Angel who faked her death just to stay away from you,she though you were a monster because of your power"


    I didn't know what to say now I was lost I didn't know what to tell him all I could think was what he told me.


    " son she hates you but she hates you more than ever now because of what you did to her" he said as he started to laugh. He got up and started to walk away but then looked at me. "stay away from her son,if you fall in love with her she will just use you then kill you" the word echo in my head as he disappear.


    I got up and started to walk home not looking where I was going until I bumped into her. "oh my I'm sorry are you okay sir?" the girl asked me.


    I looked at her and saw the most beautiful girl I ever saw in my whole life. She looked so beautiful with her beautiful red hair, green eyes, beautiful soft white skin and perfect smile I ever seen. "umm yeah but are you okay?" I asked her.


    " yes I am thanks for worrying" she said as she smiled at me making me blush as I looked down. " I'm Serena and you are?" she said holding her hand out.


    " I'm Hunter nice to meet you" I said still looking down but I grabbed her hand and shake it.

    " oh yeah your the new student to the school, right?" she asked me.


    I nodded. " yeah I umm just moved here on Monday" I said then looked at her and smiled.


    " your cute when you smile." I turned bright red when she said that to me. I just couldn't believe someone as perfect as her called me cute. " well I gotta go home I hope we see each other again" she said walking toward me and kissing me on the cheeks then leaving.


    I touched my cheeks in shock not noticing that Christine was behind me. " Hunter how dare you flirt with someone else? " she said to me slapping my head.

    I looked at Christine and started to walk away. " stay away from me Christine I don't ever want to see your face ever again " I said to her leaving her crying as I finally got home.


    " Son why are you so happy? " mom asked me.

    " nothing mom,I'm going to my room now " I said walking to my room an laying on my bed touching my cheeks.
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  3. Flirt! Flirt! Lololol
     
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    I was about to go to sleep when I was saw a flashing light outside my window. My mom came bursting into my room and grabbing me pulling me away as my bed exploded. " you bastard come out now Dean " my mom called out as a shadow figure to appear by my room window.


    The person looked at me with hatred as he pointed at me. " you how dare you hurt my little daughter heart " he yelled at me. My mom stood in front of me.


    " I won't let you put a finger on my son Dean, he did what I told him and that was to stay away from angel aka Christine I don't want someone like her close to my son" my mom said mad as her body started to turn into water.


    " Lunar the maiden of water, I never though your son was this pathetic fool " he said pointing at me. " he won't ever meet the requirement to become a true hero like you " he said taunting mom.


    " shut up don't you dare insult my son " she said shooting a big pool of water toward him. He jumped off and landed in the ground. I jump up attacking me hitting him in the face making a huge crater in the ground.

    " don't you ever call me weak you bastard because next there won't be a next time " I said grabbing him by the throat and pushing him hard in the stomach making him spit blood out.


    " Hunter stop don't kill him " mom said to me worry. I dropped Dean in the ground and went back to stand next to mom. I looked around and saw Christine watching me in fear as she went running away.


    " you hurt my daughter again " Dean said before fainting. I started to run after Christine but mom grabbed my hand.


    " let her go son she doesn't need someone as good and special as yourself " I pulled myself away and went running toward where I saw Christine was at. She looked at me crying.


    " it wasn't enough breaking my heart so you decided to beat my father up when he just wanted to protect me and talk to you " she said to me tears falling on her face. I sat next to her and grabbed her cheeks. " why must you hurt me so much "


    " I'm sorry Christine I never meant anything it's just that my parents told me not to get close to you " I looked down. " I'm sorry please don't cry "


    " Hunter I love you I been in love with you ever since we were kids, I'm sorry for faking my death but it was the only way to forget about you but I couldn't I was thinking about you every time crying whenever I saw your sad face " Christine said grabbing my hand. " I was so happy seeing you again because I never fully understood how I felt toward you until now. "


    " Angel don't cry please, I never meant to make you cry " I told her before kissing her.

    She kissed me back in shock. " please forgive me for hurting you " she said looking at me in the eyes.


    I shakes my head. " there is nothing to forgive you about, I am not mad at you or anything. " I smiled. " let's go before it starts to rain " I said to her.


    She nodded as we got up and started walking home holding hand not noticing that someone was watching me closely.


    " I promise your dad that I won't let you get anywhere near her and I will keep that promise " the person said before disappearing.
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  5. Great job! Remember to use commas! Awesome story