Shipwrecked Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *naomisoxy (01), Mar 7, 2011.

  1. I'm here? Lol. Apologies. Currently in the office. Can't write at the moment. 
     
  2. O.O can I be in tha story?
     
  3. Shipwrecked Announcement!!

    Hi PIMD,
    From now on, I will be changing the format of writing a little. Basically some parts will be written in first-person pov, so apologies if you get a little confused. 
    Secondly, I'll try my best to put everyone in, but I may not be able to give everyone a main role. So do forgive me if I put you in a small part. I'll do my best to give you at least 3 paragraphs of 'fame'.

    Again. Thank you for reading! 
    Love,
    Naomi
     
  4. Naomi

    Timecheck.
    Two hours up.

    Naomi had taken note of where everything was, paying close attention to not rousing any suspicions. She made her way back to her room.
    As she was walking round the back of the ship, she caught glimpse of a tall lady with waist long hair, wearing a black trench coat. Accompanying her was a feisty and active girl wearing a ship's crew uniform. Naomi tried to eavesdrop on their conversation. The only words she could make out were: "The girl with the Wolf tattoo."

    Charlie

    Charlie was getting bored with his cousins' constant banter, and he could tell that Qin shared the same sentiments. Bliz was now going on about how to do a proper workout, and Nana was giving comments on how scientifically, certain protein shakes were not good for the body.
    Charlie rolled his eyes. As the youngest, he somehow felt the most mature of the lot.
    He closed his eyes for a while and when he opened them, he noticed that the girl sitting at the next table seemed familiar.
    With a cheeky grin, he snuck over to her table.

    Extasy

    ****! (note: some words have been sensored for the benefit of younger readers. )

    This was getting bad. While i was focusing on the girl with yhe grey wolf, the grey eyed boy started walking over to me! The only thoughts running through my mind?
    "Why's he coming over?! The idiotic self righteous, self loving ego-maniac is walking towards me!  OMG!!!"
    So as you would expect (or maybe not), I tossed my menu straight at him and ran out of the restaurant.
    "Ow! What the-!" I could hear him shout as I made my escape quicker than a ninja.
    For the strangest reason, I could hear my heart thumping in my chest. Adrenalin? I didn't think so.
    "It must be those damn eyes!"
    I had never seen grey eyes before. "Ah! That must be it." I was pleased at my deduction and quickly made my way back to my room.

    Charlie

    "What the heck?!"
    I was starting to think that that girl was just plain crazy! Nana and Bliz were laughing their heads off, and for once, i thought I actually saw Qin amused. 'Great...' I thought to myself.
    Bliz came over and placed his arm over my shoulder. "Well lit'le bro, that was one girl that finally managed to give you a good whack." He was stifling his laughter.
    "You totally got owned!" Nana burst out laughing, again.
    I turned to look at Qin. Since she wasn't really laughing, I figured I'd feel better looking at her. I sat back down at the table.
    "You might want to put some ice on that." Qin said in a monotonous tone, and pressed down hard on my bruise with her thumb.
    "Ow! What the-! Seriously?!" I cried out.
    Qin smirked. She seemed to enjoy watching me yelp in pain. Great, I thought. Not her too.
     
  5. Qin

    Nana and Blake escorted their 'poor' little 'beat up' cousin back to the room.
    With all the 'action' that was going on, I knew I needed another drink.
    So I made my way back to the bar.
    This time, I noticed someone else sitting at the bar. "Strange," I thought to myself. "I thought I was the only one crazy enough to drink in broad daylight."

    It reminded me of the times when Naomi and I would sneak in and steal some of Hank's liquor for fun. We always caught him drinking on his own, in his study. He always claimed that the alcohol helped him calm down and de-stress, and Naomi and I swore that we'd never become like him.
    "Look where I am now." I laughed to myself. "I guess people do change."

    I took my seat at the table. The bartender slid over a coaster. "A tequila shot please."
    He made the drink fairly quickly and placed it on my coaster. "You know ma'am, you shouldn't drink in the day."
    I looked up, expecting to see the same busybody bartender from earlier, but to my suprise this one was different. He had straight jet black hair and a long fringe that covered his left eye. He smiled at me.
    I ignored his comment and took my shot.
    "Another one?" he inquired.
    I nodded.
    "Do you want to try something new?" he said as he poured out another shot.
    "Sure." I replied nonchalantly.
    He placed my second shot in front of me and proceeded to make his recommended drink.
    "I named this one "Whisky by the tree. It's my own concoction."
    I raised my eyebrow. "Why'd you give it such a name?"
    "Because it has tree bark." he grinned.
    Okay. I thought to myself. What have I gotten myself into.
    "See that lady over there?" he motioned to the Asian 3 seats down. "She's addicted to it, on her second glass."
    He mixed the drink and served it.
    It was green, with a light brown residue at it's base. "Looks like a tree." I stated.
    "That's the idea." he gave me a toothy grin.
    I took a sip. It was sweet, with a bitter and woody aftertaste; strangely calming.
    "Good eh?" he knew I was enjoying it.
    Without answering him, I gulped down the rest and ordered my usual whisky.
    "What's your name bartender?"
    "Apoc." he replied as he wiped down a glass. "I love trees."
    "Huh, trees huh?"
    "Yep."
    I quietly sipped up my whisky. My eyes turned to the lady down the table. She had a fingerless glove on one hand. And that's when I saw it, a head of a White faced wolf peeping out at her wrist.
    "It can't be." my mind was spinning in my head.
     
  6. Hah I got what I deserved
     
  7. Haha why are so many threads about people liking trees
     
  8. I STARTED THE TREE CRAP
     
  9. Ik and there is also about Aaron being a tree
     
  10. He took that from me.....
     
  11. Hmmm I wonder when my MAIN CHARACTER will come in?
     
  12. Lol some people won't have one I do because I an Naomis long lost best friend. Charlie because he's the son of captain, uh but idk y extasy
     
  13. For comic relief.
     
  14. Can u add me?
     
  15. U were added apoc ur the bartender lol