senior year

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Fancy_Mia (01), Nov 19, 2011.

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  1. 
     
    #21 *-Ayano-Fire-Konachan- (01), Nov 24, 2011
  2. I'm sorry your a good writer but not with all the "my girl" and "my boys" try and use words such as "you" or "them" it kinda gets annoying
     
    #22 *The-_-One (01), Nov 24, 2011
  3. thanks for the feedback guys I'll work on it  Happy thanksgiving!


     
    #23 *Fancy_Mia (01), Nov 24, 2011
  4. your a great writer Mia...love your story....I'll try to update mine soon
     
    #24 kim-ay, Nov 26, 2011
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