Nice story but imma be honest. Way too many points of views. I don't like re reading a scene or moment or dialogue. But that's just my opinion
Aaron I couldn't let Dynn die. She was my best friend. But as soon as I heard the shot, I knew things were gonna get bad. BANG I felt the bullet zoom past me..... And I saw Ashley flat on the ground. I turned around..." Chris? " I said puzzled. " you think that I would let her kill my sister?" Chris hugged Dynn tight. After Chris left Dynn drove me home." Uhhhh... Well.. Thanks." I said nervously." no problem." she answered. We looked into each others eyes and then.......... You finish the sentence...
Dynn I heard the trigger pull. The next thing I knew Ashley was dead. She was my best friend...... But she was kinda crazy. I wonder if Charlie was cheating on her.. I turned around and saw Chris holding a gun. My mother would've been so proud! I hugged Chris, I love him. After five minutes of hugging I drove Aaron home. I walked him inside and we stared into each others eyes but looked away. I know he's gonna sit with me at lunch tomorrow. It's our everyday routine! He's like a brother to me. Except I don't fight with him..... But will he ask me out?
Damien Being the new kid at school kinda sucks. I don't know anyone. Except Dynn. She was my old friend. I went to my locker and took out biology. I went to class and on my way there I saw Dynn." Hey Dynn! " I elbow her." hey! Damien I haven't seen u in forever!!!!! But I need to talk to u after class." she said with a serious face. Me her and Ashley have been friends for a while. I wonder what happened to Ashley........ When I got into class I saw Dynn with Aaron.... Not Aaron. Not again........