Secrets of the Silent

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CyBeR_x_ANARCHY (01), Mar 15, 2012.

  1. I'm back!!!
     
  2. Hey. Wazzup. Good to see you again. Btw did you change your character.
     
  3. I haven't changed my character since my last post. He isn't the joker one though, he's just a guy in a black hooded cloak with massive power.
     
  4. Ok that's what I thought. Thanks.
     
  5. Can you explain your person to me again?
     
  6. Well I haven't actually described him yet, the only thing people know is that he wears a hooded cloak and can swordfight
     
  7. I think I might update
     
  8. Oh so he is nighthawk. Ok
     
  9. Yea and plz update.
     
  10. Darquesse ran towards the Tower in hope to catch the Doctor before he got there. She kept running in the shadows, staying concealed and away from prying eyes. Ahead of her was the Tower, about half a mile away. She saw two figures walking towards it, she thought it must have been the Doctor and some stupid assistant.

    A hand touched her shoulder. She grabbed it and flipped the attacker over her head straight on to the floor and pointed Night's Edge at the person. No escape. The attacker was a man, dressed in a crisp black suit. He looked like a government agent - Darquesse was about to thrust the sword through his neck, but as she did he moved his whole body and swept her feet from underneath her with his left leg. She fell on her back and quickly righted herself. The two opponents stood opposite each other, focusing on every movement that their opponent made. The attacker had a wide stance, with one hand aimed at Darquesse and the other ready to block. Darquesse adopted a very agile, counter focused stance, making sure that she could block every attack thrown at her. The attacker thrust his attacking hard towards Darquesse, with this movement fire flew from his hand, Darquesse merely deflected the blast with a shield of darkness and instantly punched a fist of pure dark energy into the attacker's abdomen. She then went back into her stance. The attacker's eyes flashed red and he threw fireball after fireball at Darquesse, hoping to break her defence. Fire whipped through Darquesse's block and flashed against her face, creating a long burn from her cheek bone to behind her ear. This caused her to lose focus and further let her guard down. She was pummelled with countless flurries of fire.

    "Hey, punk. Let go of my agent!" NightWolf jumped into the air, Murumasa in his hand, and crashed down into the ground sending a long trail of fire towards the attacker. The attacker couldn't block and was sent flying backwards. NightWolf picked up Night's Edge and fused it with Murumasa, creating a sub-epic sword, stronger than both legendary swords but not as strong as the Ultima Blade, called the Burning Shadow. NightWolf sent a barrage of fire imbued darkness missiles at the attacker. In return the attacker unleashed his full potential, his fire attack turned blue and he was able to create lightning and fire it. (An ability only available to the most powerful fire sorcerers) The fight was epic, NightWolf dodged the attacker's attacks and the attacker did the same. A huge smoke cloud had formed and as the fight ended and the cloud faded all that was in view was a large crater and the victor.
     
  11. Nicely done update. Ima start to writing my update.
     
  12. Le bump

    It's pretty awesome
     
  13. I thought I'd add some nice combat as I was getting bored with writing descriptive narrative
     
  14. That's a good idea
     
  15. Bump. I'm thinking bout updating tomorrow
     
  16. Where's Otto?
     
  17. Waking up in an alley was not the ideal morning. Alcohol was definitely not a contributing factor to this decision... or at least I think it wasn't. "It wasn't. Everything is ok for now. But it'll be better if we start moving.[i/]" I couldn't argue with it. It hasn't really been wrong yet. And also it would just kind of be weird arguing with someone. In my head. Who I have no clue who they are.

    What even happened yesterday. And where is Bella.[i/] These thoughts went racing through my mind. It wasn't directed towards me or.... that voice that is definitely not my conscience.

    "All in do time. First we have to find a safe area. Well what are you waiting for. A special invitation to an extravagant house, move your fat ass.[i/]" he said, with a patronizing tone.

    Wow your an annoyance. Im going, I'm going. You could say things in a nicer tone. And a nicer vocabulary.[i/] So off I was, roaming the streets of another unfamiliar town. Finding an foreclosed upper middle class house. I wasn't extravagant enough on the exterior to go in full detail, bur I was a nice shade of white with crimson shudders, giving it a feeling of.... well, really nothing.

    "This is safe enough. Close your eyes, and open your mind[i/]"
     
  18. Aaarrrgggghh. I fucked up the bbcodes. Hold on. Let me fix it and call it my update