Secrets of the Silent

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CyBeR_x_ANARCHY (01), Mar 15, 2012.

  1. Ok I'll try. I was just wondering what Otto thought of it
     
  2. Sure you can. I've been kinda busy lately... Barely got the ROZ update in... Just figured I should check this before going to bed...
     
  3. It's still alive!
     
  4. Yea. Ima try to think of what to say.
     
  5. I think I'm gonna update in about an hour
     
  6. NightWolf walked over to his weapon rack, only 4 of his 5 swords were there, that stupid mortal lost Excalibur! Not to worry, he still had Night's Edge, The Buster Sword, Frostmourne and Murumasa. Each sword had different powers, Night's Edge was imbued with darkness and sheer terror, The Buster Sword had no specific element but could cut through vibranium, Frostmourne had the power of ice and was used my Lalfie, the king of the frost giants when they froze Earth, Murumasa was the sword of fire and pure hatred and the last sword, Excalibur was the sword of light and holiness and was the only sword able to stop Galactus, the eater of worlds. NightWolf was not concerned about losing the sword as such, he was more concerned about who possessed it, if it was that stupid Doctor then he had no choice but to kill him, but that wasn't going to happen, the only thing that could defeat the bearer of Excalibur in battle was the Ultima Blade which was made by combining all 5 of the legendary swords. NightWolf had to get Excalibur another way, when the Doctor had his guard down, yes, he'd send in his best operative - Darquesse, she could control darkness, perfect for staying in the shadows. She wielded two long katanas that were copies of Murumasa although not nearly as strong. If all else failed Darquesse could use her female assets to persuade the Doctor into handing over Excalibur for she had the perfect body, curves in all the right places, long legs and the most beautiful face you'd ever see, her features were perfect, her skin was flawless and her bright blue eyes were hypnotic; she had gained this eye colour when she was imbued with pure magic for she was just a mortal and NightWolf's father saw potential in her. NightWolf was unsure about how dangerous this mission was so he let Darquesse use Night's Edge for this assignment, she was now the most powerful dark sorcerer alive, until of course NightWolf took back the sword. All Darquesse now had to do was find the Doctor and bring back Excalibur.


    *Author's note - all these swords are all real in the sense that they appear in video games and such so you could probably find Google images of them if you wanted to*
     
  7. Seems legit.
    PIKACHU APPROVED OF AWESOMENESS.
     
  8. "Oh. You're awake." Her jet black hair was reaching the back of her knees. Her lips looked like she just drank a glass of red wine. But since it's like 6 in the morning, I don't really think so. "breakfast is down stairs on the table, and your bag is in the closet over there," she said turning and pointing towards the sliding closet doors. "I will leave if you wanna change out of your clothes." with that she closes the door. After I heard her muffled footsteps descend down the steps, I opened the closet and unzipped my bag. I didn't bring much clothes. The ones I had were either destroyed, lost, or on me. I had one par of pants and one sock. After changing the pants, I descended the steps to find a plate of crispy bacon, a small stack of pancakes, covered with enough syrup to cover the top and have some drizzle down the sides. In front of the plate was a clear glass of oranges juice, with the carton of it near the middle of the table. Once I started to walk into the kitchen, the lady brought out another plate and placed it in front of the adjacent chair. She sat down and started to begin pouring herself something that looked like tea. After taking one step, she looked towards me and looked over me.

    "Sorry I'm a mess," I said as I walked over to my seat, feeling her gaze all around me.

    "I'm not much better," she replied, returning her gaze to her food. "I thought you were changing."

    "I did"

    "You changed what"

    "My pants."

    "Why just your pants?"

    "what else should I have changed into. My pants, no shirt, and mix-matched socks."

    "where's your other clothes?"

    "Gone, shredded, and tattered."

    "Well we will have to go shopping then."

    "We don't have to."

    "I was already going. It would be nice to have company. I'm Bella."

    "Hi." I wasn't sure to trust her or not. Living on your own teaches you to trust only instinct and yourself. But if she is really getting me new clothes, then I can't really pass up the offer.
     
  9. A couple of missing punctuation marks, a spelling error there, BUT GOOD.
     
  10. Awesome but needs some work keep writing and use good grammar and puncuation
     
  11. Ik but it'd like ten o'clock. I write better when I'm not half awake
     
  12. Ah, excused. xD it's still awesome.
     
  13. Right Otto's next, me and him are linking our stories so when you want to Cy just pm and we can talk about it
     
  14. Kindof hard if one of u's isn't following the other.
     
  15. Alright I'm next then. But I'm going to post a new story soon as well. Just for me to write when I'm depressed. (which is often recently)
     
  16. Posted new story just now... I'll write the update ASAP. So... Within the week? Maybe?