Secret Sanctuary

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *funkyhamster (01), May 22, 2011.

  1. This is pretty awesome can I be in it?
    Charlie
    6'2", tan, strong, brown hair that flips to a side. From the south so I'm pretty hick
    Nice, funny, and anything else
    I love football and basketball especially football I am a beast at it
     
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    Sweetness.


    Can I be in it?


    I say pretty successful for new story!
     
  3. I couldn't stop. My heart was racing. Ariel, my little sister, only three years younger than me and Danny, a year younger had just disappeared. For all I knew, they were dead. Then I heard the whispers. "you worthless child!!!" my mothers voice hissed.
    "thanks to your 'heroic' attempt, your danny and Ariel have been killed! You disgrace!!!" my fathers voice hissed.
    "I don't know what I ever saw in you! You mess everything up!" my boyfriends voice said.
    Then the worst came. My five year old sister sobbing. "how could you do this to them Angie?! I loved them!!!"
     
  4. It's not real!! They're coming for you!!! I told myself. Suddenly I saw a flash af scarlet leap at me. I dodged and it fell into the wall. It had been my fathers mutt. I shot it. I cant tell you how much it hurt me to do so... I kept running. It was all I could do. I blinked. When my eyes opened, i was free, outside. They must have had some sort of force field that looks like a wall from the inside. I put my hands in the air, welcoming the sunshine. But there was none. All I saw was an orange haze and smog, with large machines drilling up the ground...
    What had they done to my home?
     
  5. I didnt have much time. The mutts were still coming... I ran, searching for somewhere safe to stay.
     
  6. What the heck?! I just typed a huge freakin thing and only that showed up??!!
     
  7. Running, I saw a muscular guy peeking out of under a crate. He waved me over. I slid in beside him. It was an underground room. He sat on a stone and threw a football into the air and then caught it "hey. How'd you get out?" he asked "I'm Charlie, by the way."
    I nodded, skeptical. "angie." I said. He sat bolt upright.
    "You don't know Sarah, do you?" he asked hurriedly. The football fell and landed on his head. "ow!" he said rubbing it.
    "ya... She was my mom. She's dead." I said.
    "did she tell you anything about the Secret Sanctuary?" he asked
     
  8. How is it so far.... ? 
     
  9. ....... Is that bad???
     
  10. Nah it's good.
     
  11. Phew... I'm a perfectionist
     
  12. And extremely self concious.
     
  13. Work 2morrow. I'm not gonna be able to write til night probably
     
  14. i love this story, thanks for putting me in it
     
  15.  FOOTBALL!!!!!!!!