School Confessions

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by RavenLovegood99, Jan 5, 2012.

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  1. Great story, but I'd very much like a bit more descriptions of the main characters and environment. Apart from that, this has been done wonderfully! 
     
    #21 *-Kris-stacks_of_books (01), Jan 6, 2012
  2. Thanks, I'm typing it up on my laptop and I've made loads of changes so far
     
    #22 RavenLovegood99, Jan 6, 2012
  3. Awesome, I'm looking forward to it!
     
    #23 *-Kris-stacks_of_books (01), Jan 6, 2012
  4. Sammie end up getting a detention in chapter 4 
     
    #24 RavenLovegood99, Jan 6, 2012
  5.  Have you read my story yet?
     
    #25 *-Kris-stacks_of_books (01), Jan 6, 2012
  6. Yeah, it's good
     
    #26 RavenLovegood99, Jan 6, 2012
  7.  really good
     
    #27 NinjaJosh, Jan 8, 2012
  8. Lol, I was thinking of the similarities of detention 
     
    #28 *-Kris-stacks_of_books (01), Jan 8, 2012
  9. Bumppp
     
    #29 *Ladyviolet (01), Jan 8, 2012
  10. YEAH!! PRANK!!! WOOOOOOO!!!!
     
    #30 *LilySnape (01), Jan 8, 2012
  11. MOOOOORRRRREEE!!!!!!- :-o
     
    #31 *Tomo2407 (01), Jan 9, 2012
  12. Tom Canlag

    Whatever lily's age is

    Flirt, dirty,naughty flirt

    Brown hair and eyes, tanned skin
     
    #32 *Tomo2407 (01), Jan 15, 2012
  13. Lilys age is unknown
     
    #33 RavenLovegood99, Jan 15, 2012
  14. Whatever
     
    #34 *Tomo2407 (01), Jan 15, 2012
  15. Kris Thorn
    Age: Whatever
    Personality: Witty, can be sarcastic or spiteful. Generally nice, a bit goofy. Isn't very experienced with flirting...

    Anything else is up to you.
     
    #35 *-Kris-stacks_of_books (01), Jan 15, 2012
  16. Iz gonna write a description even though I'm already in the story.
     
    #36 *LilySnape (01), Jan 15, 2012
  17. I need looks kris
     
    #37 RavenLovegood99, Jan 15, 2012
  18. ^_^ Epicness.
     
    #38 *UltraViolet_ (01), Jan 15, 2012
  19. Okay lily
     
    #39 RavenLovegood99, Jan 15, 2012
  20. Also had 5 gf's so is super experiances and confident with flirting
     
    #40 *Tomo2407 (01), Jan 15, 2012
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