Scary Short Stories. "Drinking water"

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Fume, Aug 9, 2014.

  1. I did do stand up for a year.
    That was until I broke my leg and fell down during a stand up.
     
  2. "Stand up" 
     
  3. Yeah even door it was more of a sit down after the incident.
     
  4. *Though

    That's another problem I have with these iPhones, fucking things autocorrect the words to make them even more wrong.
     

  5. I honestly can't tell if you're lying or not. 
     
  6. You know, I respect both you and Rani as writers quite a bit. So I don't like seeing either of you being offended. However. It's a shame to see you copying stories like this. If you want to prove you can write, maybe you should scrap this and come up with something original? That, in my eyes, would also redeem yourself.

    And that A* you got in English really means nothing if you're copying what other people have written. An A* in English doesn't even show that you can write! Writing is mainly about creativity, the grade you get is based on your use of grammar, punctuation, structure and analysis. I got an A* on my mock, but I felt that the piece I wrote for it was a piece of shit.
     
  7. I agree with Tash
     
  8. I don't get time as I'm making music 24/7 though. Would if I could, I did start a boom series a while back in 2011 which became popular on here with over 100 pages. Since then I just lost time...
     
  9. Omgs you guys.


    - He created one post of an "original story" and claimed wrote it.

    - He wrote another post (after being called out on the first one) that he claimed was an "original story."

    - Then he claimed to have evidence that I copied I story, but he's too "lazy" to find it.

    - Then he said he did stand up comedy, but he "broke his leg."

    - NOW he's writing music, apparently 24/7 and he wrote an amazing story that no one can see because he wrote it awhile ago.

    Like seriously dude?  Give it up.
     
  10. Mate in just original.
    You fuck off now, your starting to do my head in a bit.

    Does anyone else get this brat nagging at them?
     
  11. Anyways I thought I told you to leave before?
    Do I have to get the mods?
     
  12. Bye! These stories are far from original.
     
  13. People can be here if they want ,besides u should just take the criticism and stop nagging already. All in all u r a terrible writer ,conversation finished. ( ̄. ̄)
     
  14. Not if I ask them to leave there not.
    It's the TOU, "If a OP asks you to leave the thread, you must do so"
     
  15. "• If the thread owner asks you to leave their thread to excessive spam, profanity or inappropriate behaviour, you must not continue to post."

    You can't stop people from posting just because you want too. Also, if you mention them or someone else does, they can post again.

    Man I feel like a nerd. 
     
  16. Yes you can actually. I'm good friends with a few mods so I know them well..
     
  17. Being friends with mods shouldn't mean anything. Favouritism isn't allowed, they won't silence someone who hasn't broken the rules just because you want them to.

    Also, calling another user a brat or whatever else is being insulting. People aren't gonna like you if you're gonna be an arse.

    You must learn to take criticism and learn from your mistakes. Nobody is right all of the time, and it doesn't hurt to apologise when you find yourself in the wrong. When I first started writing I knew I was bad, so I asked for criticism. It helped me improve more than anything else ever could.

    As for not having time for writing, that's perfectly understandable. Just focus on your music if that's what you're doing. But that's not an excuse to post stories you claim to be original. By all means, post them and include who wrote them or where they came from. But in my opinion, taking credit for someone else's hard word is one of the worst things you could do.
     
  18. Again Tash is right or u can just stop writing for a while so u can fix ur selve
     
  19. VIP why don't u just apologize. It's not hard. :-(
     
  20. Let it die.