say sexy much?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by VanillaSweet, Jun 20, 2012.

  1. But my story would probably be much shorter, party, but ill keep that in mind
     
  2. Katelyns pov

    I watch William walk away and my hatred for him burned. I couldn't take this to the police, this was personal. Nothing in jail could make him regret, especially since i know he's done this before. I also know I'm stupid for wanting this vengeance. I walk away, partially glad he had come along when he did, who knows what that other man would have done. I shudder to think.

    At the small hotel i was staying at i pull off the mattress off the bed and see my handgun right where i left it.
    I pick it up and made sure it was loaded and its safety was on before putting it in the waist of my jeans.
    I open the door and walk out back into the cold night, i close the door, shutting out the friendly artificial light that i left on.
    It was him or me, i knew it.
    I walk down the empty sidewalk and dial his number on my new cellphone. "Hello?" he asks. "Meet me at the the Frail River Dock. leave now." i say. "Ohh all mysterious are we now?" he says and laughs. "will you be there?" i ask. "maybe." he says before hanging up.
    I turn off my cellphone and continue walking, taking my chances.

    This had to end. Now.

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    cheasy-ish i know but whatever
     
  3. Heey! I changed my name i dont know no... what do you think?
     
  4. It's great! (your name and the update!)

    Use paragraphs and descriptive words! 
     
  5. Katelyn kill himWilliam ur goin down!down!down!

    -Darkness
     
  6. Update !! :) amazinnng
     
  7. Bump!!! Update please
     
  8. Williams pov

    I hang up, smiling.
    I go to my closet and pick out a nice shirt.
    Its better to look nice than to not, i think. I then grab a couple knives and my other little things.
    I check the time 6:48. Well, better get going, i think and go down to my car. I turn it on and started singing. Hy ho, hy ho, its off to work we go. I smiled and started driving to the dock.
    I parked a block away and walked, trying to be to inconspicuous.

    I see her there, standing alone and i smile and start whistling that cheery tune. She turns, she had a knife in her hand.
    "two can play that game!" i say, waving mine in the air.

    "is that what this, William? Just a sick game you play?" she asks and i smile even wider,
    "That, my darling, would be telling." i answer.
    "Now, about this date, no offense but, i would have chosen somewhere nicer." i taunted, looking around.
    "Like your cutting room?" she asks.

    "for instance." i say, and take a step closer. She lifted her knife and i lost my smile.
    I threw my knife in the air and caught the tip, feeling its perfect balance in my hand.
    Then i threw it at her. It spun in the air and landed in her side. She cried out and fell to the ground, blood pooling around her.

    "Hey! Who knew i had such good aim?" i cried in glee and took out another knife and started stepping towards her.
    Her eyes were filled with terror as i raised my knife.
     
  9. Is it good so far? 
     
  10. Bump!! It's tremendous!! lol did I spell that right 
     
  11. Tremendous. Yeep you spelled that right
     
  12. oh no! It didnt come through???
     
  13. BUMP!!!!!!