say sexy much?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by VanillaSweet, Jun 20, 2012.

  1. Is it good so far? 
     
  2. REALLY GOOD SO FAR
    BUMP
     
  3. Dang!! That's exiting! Keep writing!
     
  4. Williams pov


    I frowned as a blood stain wouldnt wash out of my shirt as i scrubbed it in the sink. I look down the hall to see the body of Emma laying there. After i gave up on the shirt i give the blade a nice wipe and go to put it back in its original spot. Then i grab a garbage bag and walk to where Emma was laying. Her abdomen was covered in blood from where i stabbed her. I kneeled over and frowned, seeing a cell phone. I pick it up and see she made a call during the time of the chase. I sighed in releif as i see that she was to stupid to make a 911 call. But then i felt my heart skip a beat as i see who she called. Katelyn, i was positive it was the same one. After a while i slipped my hand in my pocket and grab my cell phone. I call a number and heard it ring a while until i hear the voice message. "hey katelyn, its William, i know its late, but i was wondering if maybe tomorrow we could maybe meet up, possibly my place?" a smile played on my lips, "how does 7:00 pm sound?"
     
  5. I love this story! It's creepy though
     
  6. William - flashback age 6


    "Daddy! Please stop it!" I cried as i grabbed hold of his arm as he brought it back to hit mommy again. He whirled and hit me. Hard. The smell of alcohol was heavy on his breath. Mommy was also crying. I wanted to help her. "William! Get the hell out of here!" he yelled at me, pushing me back so that i fell over. It hurt since my head hit the edge of the table. "Bill, leave William out of this!" my mommy cried and he staggered over to her, then slapped her across her face. "daddy! Stop it! Your hurting mommy!" i cry and go over to her and hug her. "You useless ****, the both of you!" he yelled and grabbed me, threw me against the wall and held me there by my throat. I held his arms to keep from choking. "Bill, please! Hes only 6!" my mommy yelled. He dropped me and grabbed mommy, making her stand up. She cowered there and he kicked her in the leg, causing her to fall over with a cry. Then he kneed her in the face, making her nose bleed. I gasped for breath but limped over to pull him off with whatever strength a broken 6 year old had. Daddy growled at me, dragged me to the corner and repeatedly kicked me. I was crying in pain and tears ran down my eyes. My mommy stood up and grabbed me and pulled me into the bedroom where she locked the door. Daddy kept repeatedly trying to break down the door and managed to punch a whole through it. We huddled in the corner, mommy whispering that it would be all right, just as Daddy kicked down the door.


    Sorry its pretty gruesome and depressing, i think 
     
  7. It's scary but I like it
     
  8. Oh gosh thank god my parents aren't like that! Bump!!
     
  9. I love thissss! Bump :)
     
  10. Ill update soon ^.^
     
  11. Katelyns pov

    "how does 7 pm sound?" Williams voice came from the machine. I squealed and called him back. "Hello?" he answered. "hello! Its katelyn, i just got your message, sorry i couldn't call back earlier." i say. "oh! Thats fine. Im just glad you called." he says. I blush at this and stutter. "yeah, well no problem!" "so do you want to maybe come over to my place, maybe a little before seven?" he asked and i started breathing really fast. But then suspicion arose. "Well, no offense, but i dont really know you. So maybe we can go out for dinner or something first?" i ask. "Oh, well fine. That would be fine." he answered, an angry tone in his voice. "well, ill see you soon then." i said and hung up. That was just a tad creepy. I think before getting dressed. I finally remember to call Emma back. I'll call her later. I think. If she was in any real emergency she would have called again. I pick up Maxs leash and whistle for him, he comes barreling up the stairs, whimpering in excitement. I put him on his leash and take him outside for a walk. I was kind of disappointed and regretting turning down William, but i couldn't just go to his house without really knowing him. I mean, he could be, like, a serial killer or something for all i knew.
     
  12. yay!! this is great!!! haha and he is a serial killer update soon!!!
     
  13. Haha so maybe my dog is a spy :eek:
     
  14. William pov

    I stare at my phone. This was the first time someone has ever turned me down. I whipped my phone against the wall in anger and heard a lound crack as the screen shattered. I pick it up and felt shards of glass cutting into my hand. I will take my time on this one. I swear, clenching my hands in fists, feeling the glass cut deeper into my skin. I walk up to my drawer and took out a bag before shoving it over, which makes a big bang. Then i sit on my bed and open the bag, finding all my tools, from needles to swords all where i carefully placed them. I pick up a needle. I will make Katelyns life a living hell, until i end it i vowed. She will pay for making me feel this way.
     
  15. Damn, i meant knives, not swords! 
     
  16. I was about to say..when did this take place!! 