Saving Corpral Gowler

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by __Jake__, Apr 12, 2011.

  1. without apoc?
    affair?
     
  2. That's good.....

    ._. I'm not gay!
     
  3. u sure
    THREE-SOME
     
  4. no more gay bits btw
     
  5. Chapter 3:

    two weeks later:
    They had lost so many fine people Apoc, Chrysan, just to name a few they were now down to four C-J-S, zuess, ninja and chewy. But they were set on thier objective no matter what. They had reached a jungle and where and what was thought to be half-way things went wrong. Very wrong. Ninja scouted ahead when the heard a crack of the sniper. "Holy S***, get down!" but it was too late...
    All at once three people dropped from trees', the first knocked ninja cold, he then ran up the tree did a back-flip and landed behind C-J-S. He pulled a hunting knife and held it to his throat. His two accomplices did similar, ending up with one cold and one in a head-being painfully squeezed. C-J-S shouted "alpha beta charlie" the one with a knife to his throat called back "delta alpha tango" and lowered the knife and the others did the same. "Qin, Fletch come on out"
    two snipers dropped from the trees'
    Colonal sparrow we have been expecting you
    meet my team: privates qin,fletch and andy corpral keena and im sargeant jake gowler."
    "the intelagence says your a corpral."
    "yes in the army i am but this is the SAS"
    "wow, ok then where's your camp..."
     
  6. Can I be in this please? And this story is modeled from 'Saving Private Ryan' right?
     
  7. yeah and sure josh
     
  8. Me in!!!!



    Name: Dan
    Description: Spiked jet black hair, short, tan, skinny, brown eyes, wear all black, black leather jacket, black jeans, blacks Vans, crooked smile
    Personality: Tough, out-going, friendly, happy-go-lucky, will do anything to help friends
    Qualities: Ninjalike, genius mind, doctor skills, loves science, good at breaking codes and locks
     
  9. in other words dan a crook?
     
  10. Nahhh i like stealing food that's it
     
  11. Jcg, i Wanna Read mooore!! Please..? 
     
  12. Pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeeeee write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  13. chapter 4:

    Sargeant jake, was an interesting character with spectacular methods on the way back to camp he showed them several dead germans who had killed themselves by shooting through the high plants. His corpral, Keena was beautiful. But was never interested, only ever talking to Jake or Andy. Andy, he was a brilliant gun man who could load a gun so it fires through the magazine, and make it so it explodes in your hands. Qin was only 18 but was amazing at sniping. But so was fletch who was also 18 (apparently them two were going out) there camp was amazing and hi-tec.
    Sargeant jake said one night "we move onto germany now"
    so they are on the road to it when they were observing a war-camp and heard zuess say "holy s*** thats apoc we need to get him out!"
    "right we move fast and strong me,zuess and keena enter the base. You lot lay down covering-fire and keep them distracted. good luck Men and Women."
     
  14. Me and Qin are not going out we never will