Dan and I, led by Paul were filled in. "Apparently a man and a woman that match your descriptions of Sydney and Charlie were brought in at 23:57" he said, still walking fast. "um what?" I asked "military time Jaz, it's 9:57 pm." Dan explained. We were led outside of the campus and into the jeep that was parked not a long ways away. We drove to a gas station. "What the-DON'T STOP FOR GAS YOU NITWIT!" I screamed. He glared at me and pressed his thumb against the soft chink in the ratty building. And a small keyboard popped out and he quickly dialed in some numbers then commanded us to stand beside him. I followed reluctantly and we disappeared. Or so it seemed. In reality, we went down a hatch. That was like a slide at a water park.we landed with a thump; paul first but he skillfully jumped away before i landed and Dan landed on top of ME which made my lungs scream as the wind was knocked out of them. My back ache as his elbow slammed into me trying to break the fall."ohhh the pain!" I moaned as Dan disentangled himself from me. But I got up and we both followed Paul as he walked. I noticed my surroundings. We were in a large dark room. It looked like some sort of lab. There were vials of unidentifiable liquids. Dan found this fascinating though, his eyes wandered in awe. I grabbed his shoulder and he tore his eyes away. We walked in relative silence. Only the sound of our feet echoing as Paul opened a door.
Naomi was getting tired. Tired of Fletch shooting her venomous looks. Tired of Otto and his constant flirting. Tired of Hearts constant worrying over Dan. Tired of Sophie's overbearing optimism. Tired of Tyler's sad lost puppy attitude. Tired of Charlie's and Sydney's stubbornness to give up information. She desperately wanted to see me. She missed me so much. And she was determined to find me. Then, one day, a week or so after they'd been taken. Charlie and Sydney did not return. This was their chance. Naomi wished they had Dan. But she bravely managed to remove the top part and rewired the circuit, causing it to shut down.I know not of what exactly she did. But the door clicked open. She quickly herded them out the door with the only other rational person, Heart. Naomi pushed her luck and hot wired the mini van outside the apartment complex.
Qin u think it would be smart for my story to only have persons view on everything? I think it helps add suspense because u never know what everyone is thinking and their feelings are ? Good idea or not?