Ok, here is the next update. The story kinda sucks so far, but I did both updates at 11pm last night. Hope u like it! Quite a bit of the start is memories. Thx! That was the night I swore to myself, to my parents, I would find that man. I ran to an alley in town, sat down,and cried. I cried and cried, for at least a couple of hours. Next day, I got up, pulled myself together, and walked around town. I got lost pretty quickly. As tears started to well up in my eyes again, I saw the one place I knew. The bakery. When I got there, there was no-one. Things were going from bad to worse. I saw a note on the counter. Addressed to me. It read 'You have no-one.' It was short, but it all fell into place for me. I was angry. Very angry. "How dare you!" I yelled at him in my head. I slammed my fist down on the note, turned, and ran. Where, I didn't know. Anywhere. The next two years were much the same. Running around, trying to find somewhere to stay. Someone who loved me. But on one day, the day before my 11th birthday, someone walked over to me. A woman. A very pretty one at that. She looked at me with concern, I couldn't tell it was fake. She adopted me. I stayed there for 3 years. But i hated every minute of it. 3 bumps and I'll continue. Thankyou!!
And just so everyone knows, I wrote the last update in 8mins. Which is why its so short. And it's gunna get really big. Trust me . Thanks for being so nice guys.
And yes, I named it after Ravyn coz she helped me a lot with the name. The main character's name was originally gunna be Raven, but i changed it.