Runaway

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Luv_you, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. Yah first on pg 7!
     
  2. I see a strange looking man step out from behind the door. He is holding a knife in one hand . "Who are you and what do you want?!?!?" I almost scream. "You know who I am" he replies. "no..,it can't be." I mutter under my breath. The man Smiles, with barely any teeth. He looks like he had been in a fight. He had scars and bruises everywhere, one black eye, his hair was very messed up, He didnt look like himself. He didn't look like my brother at all. "This isn't possible" I say. "Your supposed to be dead." He frowns, "Well, I missed you too" Lena is just standing there frozen, Confused. I would be, too if I was her. "Lena go upstairs" I tell her. She runs upstairs and I turn back to my brother. "You're the one that was making those calls. You're the one that Lena saw. What do you want from us?" I almost scream, again. He just smiles and stands there.
     
  3. Sorry guys busy schedule It'll be Awhile before I update again
     
  4. UPDATE:

    "This Is Impossible." I tell him. "You Died" He looks puzzled and starts walking towards me. I step back and almost trip. "Well I'm Here aren't I?" He asks. "I'll ask you again, What do you want?" He Looks in the direction of the stairs. "Lena" he replies. "No. You Get out of my house" I walk toward him and shove him, Causing him to Fall On The Floor. "That's it, Sis" He replies, Standing. He walks towards me with a knife. I see Lena peek down the stairs. I Look At Her and motion for her to get back upstairs and lock her door. I Grab my brother's arm, Twisting it. I take the knife from him and point it at him. He Looks At me and laughs. "I'm not afraid of a knife." he smiles his ugly smile. I grab a Gun off of the counter and point it at his head. Then, I Smiled. "You Really should have died. You deserve to. Now, You have Three seconds before I blow Your head off. One......Two....." He held up his hands and slowly backed out the door. I locked the door and ran upstairs.
     
  5. WOO  GO ZOEY  THIS IS REALLY GOOD MY DEAR  You should continue this 
     
  6. Lol Thanks Nicky
     
  7. Update:

    I knock on Lena's Bedroom Door. "Lena it's ok, He's gone." I stand there for a minute. "Lena? Lena, He's Gone Hun. You Can Come Out Now." I repeat. No Answer. I Pick The Lock, Which I haven't done in forever so it took me a couple tries. I opened her door. I don't See Lena Anywhere. I look all around her room. Not Here. I Cuss under my breath. I look over at the open window. I walk to the window and look outside. There, on the ground, is Lena. She's sitting on the ground staring at something that she's holding. "Lena!" I call to her. She looks up at me, slowly. "What's Wrong aunt Fayde?" She asks in a voice that isn't hers. I see she has Solid Black, Glassy Eyes. It's not Lena. *I get up and walk to the window. I pull back the curtains and scream. On my window is a bloody handprint. I see a blur move to the next window. I follow. Then the next, then the next. I suddenly realize that the thing is trying to get in my house. I scream and run to the door, locking it. The door handle rattles and the house shakes* I stare into Lena's, no, The Thing's Eyes. "What Are You?!?" I Yell At her. The Thing smiles and suddenly Lena is lying on the ground, Passed out. I run outside and sit next to Lena.
     
  8. Update:

    I say Lena's Name several times before she wakes up. "Wha....What Happened?" She asked. "Confusing Story" I told her. "I was just in my room, sitting at my desk, and all of a sudden, I'm....Out Here" She Tries to stand up and falls down again. I help her Up And Help Her Inside. I tell Her What I Saw And What Happened. "Woah, Freaky" She says. "Very." I reply. "Lena, I don't want you leaving this house. At all. Is That Clear?" I say. "But.....What about my friends...And...." "Lena, I said no." I tell her again. "I don't want to be trapped here all the time!" She yells at me. "Lena! It is dangerous out there! I don't want you to leave this house. AT ALL!" I reply my voice rising. "Is That Clear?" She stands up and rolls her eyes. "Chrystal." She answers. "Don't roll your eyes at me Lena." "I'm Not Rolling my eyes, I'm admiring the ceiling." She says sarcastically. She turns and runs upstairs.
     
  9. Omg! Listen to your Aunt you hard headed bitch! BUMP!
     
  10. I'm gonna have nightmares but tell me when u update also post the name of this story on my wall
     
  11. Bump ! Amazing