Runaway

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Luv_you, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. Bump!!!!!
     
  2. Yes first on page 3!!!
     
  3. Really cool.
     
  4. Info: *(stars)=flashbacks or special parts in story

    I See pictures of me and Rayna when we were younger, Pictures of us in Florida With Lena last summer, pictures of our brother who is now dead, and pictures of mother and father. *I stare at my mother and father in disbelief. I hear my mother shouting,"GO! GO!" Rayna and I run out of the house. We stare back at our house and everything in it going down in flames. We see Dally (Dallas) or brother trying to escape. He makes it. Flames fall around him in a circle.*. I had watch my mother,Father,and brother burn to death. A tear slid down my cheek and I wiped it away. I put the photo album down on the floor beside me. I went into my bedroom and layed on my bed, but I didn't dare go to sleep. But i couldn't help it. Soon I was dreaming of being 9 again. Watching everybody I had ever loved burn to death. I woke up when I heard pounding on my window.
     
  5. I'm kinda creeped out since there is something pounding on the window
     
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  7. Bump!!!!!! update!!!!!!!
     
  8. I slowly get out of bed. I walk over to the window and slowly pull open the curtains. I screamed. There, on my window, is a bloody handprint. I see a blur move. It moves to the next window. I follow. Next window. I follow. I finally realise it is trying to get in my house. I scream and run for the door and lock it. The door handle rattles and the house shakes. Another handprint shows up on the door now. I run to The room that Lena is in. She is wide awake now. I lock the door to the bedroom and lay down beside her. "aunt FAY, what is going on?" she asks slowly. "nothing sweetheart. Go back to sleep." she fell asleep again a little while later. I still didn't budge. I stayed there the whole night. The next morning, at 9:29 A.M. I hear a knock on the door. I go to the door and open it to find a police man there. "Fayde Drayke?" he asks. "yes?" I ask. "are you in any way related to Rayna Drayke?" he asks. "yes." I reply. "she is my sister." He looks down at the porch. "ma'am, I'm very sorry. Your sister is dead." I heard myself say,"no. No! This is a sick joke. She's alive. She's here." a tear slid down my face. "I'm afraid not" he replys again. I fall to my knees.
     
  9. OMG!!!!!! I NEEEEEED MORE!
     
  10. More add more I'm on the edge of my seat.
     
  11. I stayed on my knees and just kept crying. The police officer said that the Funeral is tomorrow. I cried myself to sleep that night with Lena beside me. The next day I got up and Lena And I got dressed and headed off. We arrived at the Oak grove Church. The preacher said Prayers and we all went up to see her. I cried when I saw her. I asked my Aunt Leyeta to watch Lena as I went behind the church and sat on the Cold,Wet ground with my head buried in my knees. This couldn't be happening. This is a dream. This is a nightmare. A permanent nightmare. I stare at my knees and finally get up after awhile. My phone rang again. I knew better this time. I checked the caller I.D. *Unkown Caller* I hesitated but answered. "That's one down, two to go." I hung up the phone. My sister is gone. That means I have to take over the mother role. I drive Lena home and tell her to pack her things. "where are we going?" she asks. "we're moving" I reply.
     
  12. Love it. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
     
  13. Bump!!!!! It's awesome!
     
  14. Thanks guys I can't update again until tonight
     
  15. Separate the dialogue from the paragraphs other then that great ^_^ and BUMP
     
  16. I drive To LA with Lena. We find a nice home and settle in.

    -6 Years Later-
    *Lena is now 15*

    Lena went out last night and didn't come back yet. I call her cell but she doesn't answer. "Hey This Is Lena, I'm busy at the moment do leave a message and I'll call back" I Start worrying. Lena walks in the door at 11:43 P.M. "Lena! Where were you?" I ask. "Sorry,Mom. I was at a party. Next time I will let you know where I go." she comes over and kisses the top of my head. "night mom" "Night Lena." I say.
     
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