Revenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Magical_Rani4- (01), Aug 23, 2011.

  1. Bump,iv finally got an update lol Ill post it in a sec
     
  2. After a long game of me beating Mrcoool on halo I decided I needed to change as it was nearly 9 o' clock.
    "Are you going to Jason's party/movie tonight?"I asked Mrcoool.
    "Probally,but last time I couldn't find his room a-and I kinda got lost"
    I laghed at him,standing there awkwardly shuffling his feet."Just follow me"I smirked,still laughing at him,
    "meanie"He replied,scowling jokingly.

    I bouunded into my room to change.Since it was a movie I would only wear comfortable clothes.I picked out a pear of ripped skinny jeans,a random blue top and my favourite purple hoodie."Ready!"I yelled and Mrcoool plodded into my room."Dude,are you accident prone?!"I laughed as he tripped over my straightners.

    I carried on looking for my popcorn when I realized he hadn't replied...
    "Holy crap!"I cried out,looking to where he fell.When his head hit the ground the pressure knocked him out and now his head was bleeding,it also looked like he'd landed on his foot badly as it was twisted in the wrong direction.

    I called out his name a few times but it was clear he was out.I rushed to my wardrobe and pulled out a jumper to put against his head,to stop the bleeding.Then,at the top of my lungs I yelled..."HELP!!!!." Soon enough people arived,they saw mrcoool and went of to get the headmaster.The headmaster freaked at first but then calmed down luckily and tried to call an ambulance.However,outside a huge storm was happening and all the lines were dead!

    The headmaster started to go crazy,crying on random student,doing a sort of rain dance and also congratulating baffled people on their marriage anniversary!It was clear he would be no help atall!As it seemed I was now in charge I asked the people around me to go back to their dorms.Fortounetly they obeyed.

    I took mrcoool to the girls bathroom to clean him up.I grabbed a few bandages from my medical pack and placed them across the gruesome gash on his forehead.I cringed since it was kinda gross but still continued to wipe excess blood of it.After that I took out the remaining bit of bandage however it wasn't enough to cover his foot sadly so I had to leave it,plus it was probally best if I left that to the doctors in the morning.I heard a faint groaning noise and looked down.Mrcoool was lying on the floor,waking up slowly."Hey,are you okay?"I said softly."hmmm lemme think,my foots agony,my head feels like it's burning,I have a killer headache,I feel sick,I'm dizzy and I feel like Im going to die any moment now"He said, being sarcastic."Well the lines are dead so we can't get an ambulance till tomorow and the car is broke"I spoke sighing."just great"He groaned again and tried to make it to the toilet but he couldn't move his foot so he was sick all over the floor."I'm gonna leave that to the cleaners"I exclaimed,grossed out."Can you move your foot at all?"I asked
    "Im not sure I'll try"He replied
    "Ok I'm gonna see if iv got any anti biotics in my dormitery,if you can, follow me up but otherwise I'll be back in a minute"

    I went up to my room and looked round for some antibiotics but I couldn't find them anywhere.So sadly I went down stairs....
    "Owwww!"I heard from down the stairs."What the....?"I cried out confused,racing down the steps two at a time.Mrcoool was sitting on the floor tried to lift his foot up with his hands but failing.Sighing,I pulled out the emergency stretcher I stole from a nearby cupboard and hauled him on to it.Then,staggering under it's weight,I took it up and into my room/dorm.
     
  3. Bump awesome rani ☺keep updating please
     
  4. Bump,gonna be updating again inbetween homework=)
     
  5. Yeah, it's awful, but it brings back memories. :3 My first story. ^-^ I think anyway =P. I'm bumping it so that I'll be able to compare it with my writing now. I know it's poorly written, so don't send messages going on about that, as if you look, it's from a long time ago.
     
  6. Is this hectic!!! One of the best stories on here!!!
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    Ps, I would really like some feed back on my fanfic Battle in Me' if you have time
     
  7. Did you even read it? XD Its the ****est thing here xD And I'll check out your story later. Please check out my one shot-tale of a lost flame.^.^
    It's a lot better than this.
     
  8.  how can you say that

    Everyone has their own opinion lol
     
  9. Guys I'm not updating, just useing this to compare with. :3 No point bumping it. Let it die. 