Revenge

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Magical_Rani4- (01), Aug 23, 2011.

  1. Can I be in your story?
    Name: Ken
    Personality:nice, can be mean, very sarcastic
    Description:short (5feet) about 14 and a half, tan strong,brown eyes,brown hair longish, bangs not straight across,wears neon green sunglasses and a hat everywhere
     
  2. Yup but please check revenge sighn ups as thers some other stuff to include
     
  3. I can't find it
     
  4. Lolz  it's awesome 
     
  5. can I be in it
     
  6. Awesome. It's pretty good babe. You should definitely continue writing more. I think you have some talent writing stories
     
  7. I give this 4 stars ★☆★☆ 
     
  8. 4 I give it 
     
  9. Thanks bur what outa?also if u like m,sighn up!:)
     
  10. Outfit umm
    Black shirt neon green logo
    Black jeans stud belt and as I said hat
    And neon green sunglasses
     
  11. Ok il upload tomorrow
     
  12. Beth led me to a brightly lit classroom,where two teachers were talking."Rose"Beth said"This teacher is called Mrs Dong and this teacher is called Miss Applo".
    Miss Applo and Mrs Dong smiled at me and intoduced themselves.
    "Hello Rose,it's so great to see you here!"Miss Apollo Said,beaming."I'm sure you'll settle in right away!"Mrs Dong grinned.Beth casted a weary look at the two excited teacher and then told me to wait outside the door for two minutes.After two minutes the talking ,to quite to hear properly,stopped causing Beth to emerge from the room."What was that all about?"I questioned her,confused"nothing"She replied dully,her cheeryness dropping so I left it at that.

    We Stopped outside a tennis court,as Beth gave me the grand tour,where two boys were playing tennis.One of them was wearing a sweatshirt and jeans.He also had black hair."The guy with the black hair is called Joey"explained Beth"Hes my boyfriend".I noticed Beth blushing.awww!The other boy, who had dark brown nearly black hair,jogged over to where me and Beth were standing with joey..."hey,I'm J-j-Jason"Jason stuttered.I smiled as Beth loooked at him questionally."I'm Rose"i said to both boys"I just came today" "Is Beth giving you the tour of the school?"Jason asked I replied with a nod.Joey face fell " Oh.I was hoping me and Beth could see a movie"he said sadly.
    "I could show Beth around,if you want,while you two see a film"Suggested Jason.I hoped Beth would say yes as I kind of liked Jason..."that would be great!thanks Jason"replied Beth Thrilled."We best be of"Joey linked hands with Beth and they both walked away.

    Jason showed me the busy canteen and the school grounds,which Beth hadn't shown me before leading me to my room.Outside of my room door he said"I better go.My room number is 204 so if you need me I'll be there also me and some friends are watching a movie at 9pm,my room,you can come if you want"and with that he sprinted along the corridor towards his room.

    When I opened the door I was greeted by the smell of Roses,my favourite flower.Beth must like them to I thaught.There was a mini lounge containing a midiam sized T.V and a small sofa.Also in the corner of my room was a kitchen,a sink,1 cupboard and a microwave.There were two bedrooms and a bathroom,which was filled with soap.Haha I whispered to myself I gues Beth also likes soap.

    I unpacked my bags and set my X box up.Time to kick some ass on halo!!!I shot rappidly at random objects untill my sharp ears picked up the sound of footsteps outide my bedroom door but I ignored them until..."I'll save you!!!"shouted a males voice as my door burst open.The person who opened was wearing a black shirt,which didn't go to well with his now red face."oh"he said sheepishly for he had heard me shooting on halo and had thaught someone was attaking me.I laughed and said "haha never mind you can make up for nearly breaking my door by playing halo with me" "ok."he said"but only if you call me Mrcool"(random lol)


    -Rani44

    Long update today:)
     
  13. I guess no one likes it