Remember the Promise

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *XxEatMyHeartxX (01), Mar 25, 2011.

  1. I want to b in it.....
     
  2. Wow. Heart, you really write well. 
     
  3. Can I be in it please?
     
  4.  but I don't really know any of you well enough...
     
  5. Hah it's cool if not, you couldve just said no :)
     
  6. I have to squint to make out the name. "Dr. Dan Li, M.D.D.. Well I guess that's how you knew CPR so well... You seem safe enough, I mean you could have just let me drown, so you can't be all that bad." He tries to hide a small smile when I notice his mouth is the slightest big crooked.
    I don't know why, but it was my favorite part of him so far. He catches me off-guard and lifts me onto his back. "Hold on alright? I promise it's not far, but I don't need you falling..." I shut my eyes praying he can't feel my heart beating out of my chest. He was so warm. I shake any unescasary emotions from my mind; this man is a stranger to me. I can't feel like this, it's crazy! "why... Why are you doing all this?" I ask, trying to make small talk.
     
  7.  I've got a feeling about heart and Dan
     
  8. Oh I am gettin the hints now, so heart likes Dan huh?
     
  9. I see............
     
  10. Heart, can I be in?
     
  11. Haha I just woke up  hotel has free breakfast yummy!
     
  12. I love hotels! They're awesome XD
     
  13. I know right?!? Haha there is a claw machine and my friend wins something every time she tries  my bed is covered in stuffed animals
     
  14. lucky gurl she has the "POWER"
     
  15. she is the chosen 1
     
  16. OMG LUCKY