Red Luscious Lips

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *CheekyChloe (01), Jul 7, 2011.

  1. Niceee
     
  2. Awesome
     
  3. This is so good! I'm hooked! Keep writing please. 
     
  4. Daniel's POV
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    Sigh. Bummer. I wish Dawn would fall for me instead... Too bad she doesn't know that she's being used.

    Suddenly, something appeared in front of Me.

    "Damien!"

    "So... I heard... The girl?"

    I nodded.

    "I'm going to tell you... I will enroll in that school, and I just might seduce the girl. Tell Darin. I'll be waiting in the hallway..."

    Damien laughed and disappeared. Damn. Every type of demon wants Dawn. There were three main demon types that are after her. Bat demon, Wolf demon, and Fox demons. Our little Damien here is a bat demon. Damn. They're known for their agiltity. We are know for our strength and fox demons are known for their stealth. I kept thinking while I laid In the soft sand the beach provided me, and smoked a cigarette and dreamt about Dawn. Looking at the sunset.


    Dawn's dream
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    I was in a room, all black and I was trying to breathe. I looked around me and collapsed on the water puddle floor. I heard footsteps and something walked in. I didn't care. I was panting and trying to breathe for God sake.

    "Dawn..."

    I felt something caress my cheek.

    "Who are you.. Where am I... Where's Darin!!"

    He laughed an evil laugh and just answered,

    "Why my dear, do you fall for that mongrel when I'm much better? He doesn't love you... He wants to use you!"

    "No..."

    "Yes..."

    "Who are you!"

    "If you must know, I am Damien."

    His eyes were bloody red and his hair was dark blackish gray and he was wearing a black tux. Pretty handsome. But when he talked, he sounded pretty harsh and scary and mysterious...

    "Why am I here!"

    "Why, you are a curious one..."

    "Answer me!"

    "Shhh... Be nice or the chains will tighten!"

    Suddenly, snakes appeared out of nowhere and latched onto my arms and legs.

    "Tell me. Please."

    "Much better... I am doing you a favor. I will tell you the prophecy of our demon world and you must pay attention. This is about you."

    "A prophecy? About moi?"

    "Yes. Now hush. The prophecy told us to search for a girl that is, of course, you. We, which is, the fox, bat and wolf clan had to search for you. Whoever reached you, their clan would prosper and rise. You see, I killed my own clan members for you..."

    He whispered seductively into my ear.

    "If that is true, then Darin has reached me first."

    "Ha... He hasn't told you has he?"

    "About what?"

    "You will know soon enough my dear."

    He kissed me on the lips, and I really wanted to fight back, but this kiss was so warm and inviting... I didn't know why and I shouldn't, but I kissed back. But, this is just a dream... Right?!

    We pulled away and I started panting again.

    "What's wrong?"

    He looked concerned, unlike a few minutes ago where he looked scary and mean.

    "I-I- I can't breathe... Shallow oxygen... GASP!"

    He suddenly kissed me again, and he was unbuttoning my Pjs.


    I moaned into his mouth,

    "What.. Are.. You... Doing..."

    "Hush. I'm helping you."

    Suddenly, my shirt came off and he pulled away from the kiss.

    "Is this a dream..."

    "No my dear, it isn't.."

    He put his hand on my chest and I could suddenly breathe again.


    "What was that?"

    "Dark aura was eating your soul and you were about to fade away. That's why your breathing was shallow so I called off the dark aura."

    "Thank you..."

    Suddenly, I fainted and then I woke up in my bed.
     
  5. Ohh a  Dark aura  >:]

    ]£$$
     
  6. Woah......
     
  7. I woke up in the morning, just in time to get to school.

    "Darin?"

    He wasn't there, so I got dressed and went downstairs to eat.

    "Hun, eat your food quickly. Someone's waiting for you at the door."

    "k mom!"

    I quickly finished and saw Daniel on a motorbike.

    "Yo Dawn!"

    "Hey Homie!"

    I winked at him and sat on the motorbike.

    "Homie?"

    "Ha! You did the first move, gangsta!"

    "Yo said it!"

    "Whatever!"

    I put my arms around his waist.

    "Daily hottie, pierced ear, and ocean blue eyes. I still can't believe you're single!"

    "Heh. Savin up for somebody special."

    "Ha! You better get a date, I'm taken!"

    "Ha. I can always steal."

    "I'm not an item!!"

    "Shut up and get off. We're here!!"

    I playfully slapped his arms and got off.

    "Seriously Dawn? Lavender Silk shirt that shows a black strap top underneath with black leggings and abstract violet black boots? Way to get attention!"

    "Can't handle the smexxiness?"

    Then he started to nosebleed.

    "I-I-I-"

    "HA! PERVERT!"

    "Am not!"

    "Is too! Haha! See ya Daniel!"

    I gave him a one minute kiss on the lips and left. All part of the torture.. Heheh...

    It was after class and I was in the hallway, texting Elena.


    -Elena, have you seen Darin?-

    -Nah. Seen Daniel?-

    -Hah! Oh well. Yeh, I think he's stuffing his face with pie right about now...-

    -Oh jeez. He'll lose his perfect abs with extra fat!-

    -ROFL!!-


    I was about to text more until somebody turned me around.


    "Yo Dawn!"


    "Huh?"

    I turned around to see Darin.

    "Yo. Slept at mine then left? Ha. Wow."

    "Yeah like, sorry?"

    He gave me those innocent puppy eyes and I just couldn't stay mad at my puppy bear!

    "Awww. Come here ya grizzly b-"

    "MHHMMM!!!"

    "B-Wolf!"

    I gave him a hug and we hugged until the bell rang.

    "Seeya babe!"


    "Bye Mister Grizzly bear!"

    I left him there, shock and offended. I giggled and went to class.
     
  8. Part 1 of chappie IDK
     
  9. Yay im in it but its sooo good
     
  10. Nice update , i love texting and phones . Sorry but i just like shiny and sharp things things that includes swords and phones.
     
  11. After my lame math class, I walked out the room and into the hallway.


    "Hey babe."

    I felt a pair of hands covering my eyes.

    "Darin?"

    "Nah. I'm much better than the mongrel.". He whispered seductively.

    "Gasp! You're the guy from my dream! Are you..."

    "Yes... I'm the guy... And oh it wasn't a dream..."

    He removed his hands and spun me around. Before I knew it, he was kissing me.


    "Damien!! I have a boyfriend!"

    "That's what you think..."

    He kept kissing me and he whispered,

    "You know babe, you've got red luscious lips... I'm hungry for them."

    Man! Why does everybody want my "red luscious lips"?!?


    "DAMIEN!!!"

    Daniel and Darin were screaming. Damien had already pinned me to the lockers and I was gasping for breath. He was attacking my lips until Daniel and Darin pulled him off of me.


    He wiped his mouth and grinned.

    "Seeya later hot stuff."

    He jumped into the shadows and left, but not before Darin yelled

    "Dude! The FÛCK! She's MY girl!"


    "Darin, sorry... I don't think this is working out..."

    "What?! You're dumping me for him?!"

    "No! I... I just wanna have time to think. I'm in a complicated love rhombus! Who doesn't need to think?!"

    "Babe, it ain't a rhombus. If it is, you have something for him."

    "Ugh! Fine, I'll tell you why! When he kisses me, they aren't forceful like your kisses! Their warm and and- and... Loving..."


    "Babe! HE'S SEDUCING YOU!!"


    "Just give me some time to think!"


    I left Daniel and Darin there, arguing. I cried and ran to my next class.


    Daniel's POV
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    "Fuck you! I told you somebody else might take her!"

    "It's not that... It hurts that she left me. It hurts here."

    He pointed to his heart.


    "Darin! You- you- you love her..."

    Just then, he coughed out blood.


    "Ah. It hurts THAT much?"

    "YOU SHOULD KNOW YA BASTARD!"


    He left, going to his next class.
     
  12. dumdumdum
     
  13. I threw my bags on a desk and sat down.


    "Hey babe."

    I felt somebody put their arm around my waist.


    "Damien?!"

    I pushed him away.

    "Hello class, we have a new student. Please introduce yourself."

    "Glad to."

    Damien stood up and walked in front of the whole class.


    "Name's Damien. Came from New York, 16,"

    He paused and saw a few girls winking at him.

    "And taken."

    The girls who winked at him looked sad then turned away.

    He sat back down next to me and throughout the whole lesson he put his arm around my waist.

    ---
    This is part one of the chapter unknown.
     
  14. It was ok but kinda weird ai do like when you mention Daniel's name it remonds me of a classmate and friend tht I hang out with at Brunch/Lunch. And no Brunch isnt for the little ones, they dont call it recess anymore at all now tht Im in Middle School.
     
  15. Oh also anymore character spots ? If so pls put me in.

    Katarina Farris
    Black hair blue eyes
    - Red dress , sexy
    - " Hot ", meaning she is extremly cute
    - Flirty
    - likes to 'cuddle', characters may go all the way with it if you put her in a relasionship
    - sexy
    - strong but wont resist
    - anyone may be her friend
    - Likes Boys
    - she is always around the wolves
    - Secretly she may even be one

    Past: She has had a rough past , her parents died in a vampire attack , she may have been partly turned wolf by a wolf . No one but her friends really knows what Happened to her so long ago.
     
  16. this is really good so far...
     
  17. No spots and I know what u mean. But how can it be weird?!
     
  18. ALL MY STORIED WILL NOT BE UPDATED. GOOD NIGHT. DONT STEAL. MINE.