Ready-Set-DIE!

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *-Black_White- (01), Dec 20, 2011.

  1. Omg this is good 

    I gotta make a reference of this in Karma 
     
  2. Erica's P.O.V 

    Ow! Krystyn was a complete mental case! I grAbbed my metal pipe and hopped on the roof. I simply pushed Susan off and I heard a crack. She's dead but Melody Daphne and Abigail weren't doing so good. They were passed out. I jumped down and beat up Jaydyn but Krystyn snapped my arm all I heard was her laughing. I failed Krystyn won.
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    Tiffany's P.O.V 
    I looked out the window and Krystyn was at the door. "Oh my god!" I told Deirdre there passed! "That's it then." Deirdre went to the front of the truck and grabbed all five extra white masks. "Put one on! It's worth a try." Deirdre told me. "It not gonna be that hard Susan Jaydyn and the three girls are passed or dead." I told her. "Then it'll be easy! Take a gun! I'll take a knife." we got ready and we changed clothes to the white suits. And opened the door. "Welcome I see you've beat up our friends we don't like that." Deirdre said. I wacked her with my gun and Deirdre cut her. I shot a huge bullet out of my gun and it landed right In her face. I pushed her over and Deirdre stomped on her. "come on let's wake up the others!" Deirdre said. "yeah yeah yeah." I said absentmindedly. I couldn't think straight. I just KILLED Krystyn. I smiled to myself. It felt good to be a Killer. 
     
  3. THX HEARTZ OMG ILY!!!
     
  4. Well written, but not cool anyways that I died 
     
  5. Can I be a character 
     
  6. Can my main weapon be a dagger or sword? Thank you (dagger if this is modern era,sword if this is medieval era which I'm sure it isn't but if it is okay than I would like both...but if sword would be weird I'm ok with just a dagger )
     
  7. Yes heartz what your name...
    You could use a name in ur story
     
  8. Abigail's P.O.V 

    Ohmygawd! "Way to go Deridre!... And tiff." I said as I dragged krystyns body to the ditch. "Well she would've killed us..." Deirdre said. "True but still!" Melody said. "My besties you just made yourself cooler on a whole other level!l" Daphne said. I sighed. Man putting all these body's in a ditch is hard work. I stopped dead in my tracks when my hearing aids picked up something. I ran to the trailer. "FOLLOW!" I said as a ran like hell. The other girls probably had no idea what I was doing because I'm the only one with hearing aids. Sometimes I just wear them for picking up sounds. I do kinda need them but I turn them on higher than it's suppossed to go. It won't Hurt me though. Luckily. "TRUST ME!" I screamed as I watched them all hop on the trailer. I pulled my mask on and shoved the rest at the others. I closed the window coverings. And put my hands on the steering wheel. I drove all the way randomly for about ten minutes until.. "HAVE YOU LOST YOUR MIND?" Erica squeaked. "no." I simply said. I could practically HEAR Melody roll her eyes. "Yeah obviously. Seriously Abi what happened?" Melody asked. "There after us." I said checking my rearview mirror. "Who?" Deirdre asked. "I Should focus..." I turned "while driving." I told them. Erica looked at Melody,Melody looked at Daphne and Daphne looked at Tiffany and Deirdre. "The FBI." They all said at once. "Deirdre passed out. Daphne Came up front sat in shot gun and stares at me for the longest time. "What do you want?" I asked. "Why would you make us tell them!" Daphne asked a if I had lost my mind. "Melody!" I said. "Kay!" she knew exactly what I meant. She's the "co-driver". Erica does know how to drive but she gets distracted easily and it's not safe. Hey don't ask me how she got her liscence.

    I sat in the trailer with Daph. "Well it's not a big thing FBI. If your in "the white" then you should know it's strictly BUISSNESS and serious at that." I told her. "DEIRDRE PASSED OUT! SHE NEVER PASSES OUT! For all I know SHE COULD BE DEAD!" Daphne screamed in my face. "Well excuse you for not getting them ready!" I scream back. Erica stopped playing with the frills on her dress and flipped her white hair and looked at us behind her blue pillow. Melody gazed at the mirror to see us with her Piercing blue eyes. Tiffany looked up from trying to get Deirdre Awake. And I didn't flinch one bit. "Daphne I think your over reacting!" I said moving on the couch where Erica was lying. "Relax." Erica said and she went back to playing with her frills. "Erica's right, your making something out of nothing!" Melody said. I got up and went to shot gun and checked the mirror. "F*CK MELODY GIVE ME BACK THE TRAILER!" I said. "Not so fast!" Deirdre said. "DEIRDRE YOUR AWAKE!" tiffany hugged her. "What do you mean?" I asked. "I'm a secret FBI undercover worker I'm small cute innocent no one expects me to be in such a high level buissnis put your hands up!" Deirdre pointed a gun right at Erica's face.
     
  9. Btw dedicated to: Heartz_On_Fire
     
  10. So my character just dies, lol? Damn! Grear story though 
     
  11. You changed your name like a boss. 
     
  12. FFFFFFFFFF. I JUST RESET AND PRESSED AN EFFING GUY!!!! I can't reset till tomorrow!!
     
  13.  I got a dedication 

    Now I really better mention this in Karma  Good twisting the characters up 
     
  14. Bump come onnn updatee
     
  15. Erica's P.O.V 

    Oh my god! Deirdre! Is the FBI's undercover worker? I knew there was an undercover worker but DEIRDRE? "Deirdre wh-wh-why?" I asked. "Don't play dumb Erica." she told me slyly. "The perfect plan I got close to you and I know that you ARe the white. You have killed people and are under arrest." She said still pointing the gun at my face. "Deirdre we were BEST FRIENDS! I'm so confused!" Daphne said. "Ya btw the FBI put me undercover I was "BFFS" with Susan and Jaydyn and Krystyn. The weren't telling me anything so I chose you! And now your under arrest although I HATE being the FBI! I want to kill." deirdre said. "Melody crowbar! Erica pillow! Abigail knife, Tiffany Dagger!" Daphne said grabbing her MG 47 gun. Abigail stopped the car. We grabbed our weapons. "Any of you Try anything and I kill Erica!" Deirdre said. I was scared I looked at Abigail and Melody. They nodded. "Warning I do have a weapon." I said excitedly. "Yeah I pillow!" Deirdre snorted. "Try me." I smirked. Melody snuck up behind her and Abigail stood right beside her Daphne Kept her distance and Tiffany stood there frozen. Melody smacked her in the head with the crowbar. She stumbled but didn't pass out. Abigail knifed her as she fell in her arms. "You guys are messed up!" she screamed while whacking Abigail in the face with her gun. Tiffany gently threw her dagger although it was so gentle it made a scratch "We are not messed up!" I screamed. "You are!" I threw my pillow. It smacked her And she fell right on her aas. Yeah inside the pillow was an iron plate. Finally Daphne looked at her and said. "You lied. Trust is one thing you can rebuild." she looked at her and shot. then finally Deirdre was dead.
     
  16. Dedicated to: MarshMallowKK