RAPS

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by OFM-ShinyKickZ-OFM, Jan 25, 2013.

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  1. Oh look,
    Another one steps into the ring,
    Just to be hit my my rappins sting,
    Your first verse was shameful,
    It was actually painful,

    So go on make a comeback,
    I'd love you to try,
    Or just admit defeat
    And say bye-bye.
     
  2. GreenSkittle, oh please
    You really want to test me?
    Don't think you know
    who the queen of this is, baby.

    You're rhymes are outdated
    to think that was a comeback?
    Good Lord, go sit yourself and fap

    sorry I ran out of what to rhyme
    for the last line 
    don't worry
    I'll stop this rap
    Before it gets dirty ;)





    
    Hey
    Sexy
    Laddeh
    
     
  3.  that was funny as hell
     
  4. Oh what happened?
    Did you take my advice?
    I'm sitting here waiting,
    as the time passes by.

    
    Hey
    Sexy
    Laddeh
    
     
  5. You think you can out rap me?
    Hiding behind words of comedy,
    Attempting to be witty?

    This shit ain't even testing me
    I'm one of the best you see,
    'Hey sexy lady?'
    More ' I was dropped as a baby'
     
  6. Your raps don't suffice,
    Just take my advise,
    Or no more mr nice spike.



    :3 sorry, I've been waiting to say that for ages 
     
  7. Bitterly you joined the rap circle
    Just so you could get kicked to the curve
    Here's your order, now get served
    How dare you join if you can't even rap
    Now bitterly this is no place to crap
    I dispose of your rhymes
    I've heard em all many times
    Look em up on google
    There all there like a picture of a poodle
    Bitterly you just got served
    Did I strike your last nerve
    You mad bro mad
    Cause if anything your rhymes are just sad
     
  8. Bonka, tryna act all cool,
    Bitterlys got better raps than you,
    Your just a fool,

    Your rappin was good,
    But not good enough,
    Now go practise being 'tough'
    And leave the rappin to us.
     
  9. Greenskittle rap battle me vs. You, you go first
     
  10. 
    Sound,
    Let me in your club.
     
  11. I laugh at the absurdity,
    Bonka thinks he has the right to challenge me,
    Now y'all can watch as he's gonna be,
    Ripped apart by my lines,
    Just you and me.
     
  12. I never thought this thread would last this long,
    Watch me as I make a song,
    Cause all you are wrong,
    Now sing along wit me
    Onizuka is the best,
    And I'll stomp on ya like a pest!!

    Haha mini rap,

    And cya
     
  13. Skittle your raps are disgusting
    I hate to be criticizing
    Learn to spit something new
    Btw my dog ate your shoe
    Your leg seems to be dripping
    Did someone take in ass whipping?
    Skittles you pissed your pants from fear
    I would never shed a tear
    Sure I act like im tough
    Have you had enough?
    Well to bad boy
    Cause your my new chew toy
    I'll slice you
    And dice you
    Put you on a slate
    Slide you onto a plate
    Eat you for breckfeast
    "damn hes delicious"
    To bad your rhymes suck
    Cause I don't give a fuck
    Toss I'm em in the trash
    Cause they'll never make any cash
     
  14. Buisness, are you being serious?
    You can't even spell the crap from your name,
    And I'm hurt 

    Let me take a moment to say,
    If you can't withstand on literacy
    You might as well not spit rhymes
    cause you're ruining poetry.

    Brb in war haha
     
  15. My name is messed up
    I did that for a reason
    I'll beat you in any season
    How do I ruin poetry?
    Please tell me another story
    My name is spent badly
    I know I write sadly
    But bitterly I will always write better
    Better then you
    Spit something new
    Your contents getting old
    Your rhymes just got cold
    I'm no discrace to rhyme
    Cause I'll beat you any time
    Your rhymes are so sloppy
    Go snort another poppy
    You look depressed
    Have you been overstressed?
    I don't give a crap about you and your story
    All I know is your raps are written poorly
    I fly freely on a daily basis
    At least I'm not held now by a crisis
    You can never fly like I can proudly
    Cause your flight just got grounded
    Cause your pilot just got pounded
     
  16. You're really missing my point
    Therefore, let me make it clear
    You come around here
    Trying to be someone you aren't
    Oh please, junior
    You've proven you're nothing
    It makes me laugh,
    reading your crap
    And how you think you're all that
    You egocentric douche
    Go screw a moose
    
     
  17. 'Your dog ate my shoe'?
    How old are you? 2?
    You say my rhymes won't pay,
    Who the fuck are you anyway?

    Your gonna eat me for breakfast?
    Yeah that's real smooth,
    But my spellings compelling,
    You should listen,
    When your Grade 2 teacher is talking.
     
  18. Spike just owned you,
    What are you going to do?
    Check up on google
    And see what else you can pass of as you?
    Oh c'mon, junior
    Lets be realistic here
    You're heading straight to plagiarize-ville.
     
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