Positive or Negative Feeling?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Nov 18, 2011.

  1. Can someone pwease give me a comment not bump? 

    I mean a bump is good but I hve no clue what's good or bad about my story .
     
  2. Give In To Temptation~ Drink His Blood~ Oi Wait... That Guy... What's His Name?Dun Tell Me...
     
  3. Ok well your story is great,though it's about vampires it's not scary 
     
  4. Is Dan talking about Jeebus? 
     
  5. Now who the heck is Jeebus?
     
  6. Jeebus is Jesus But Grannies Says Jeebus
     
  7. Oi Dan 
     
  8. ?What. Since when did vampires want to drink Jesus's blood!
     
  9. I can't tell you, Dan.

    I can only tell you on the next next update.
     
  10. Now my question Who's that boy?Dun say next update
     
  11. Too bad I already said it
     
  12. Omfg  I just lol'Ed 
     
  13. Damn it! When is the next update?
     
  14. And I said NEXT NEXT update, so it doesn't matter if you know when the next update will come
     
  15. When am I going to come out?
     
  16. The birth of Dan 

    (choir voice)  aahh~~~
     
  17. Is There No Sneak Peek?
     
  18. We must sneak a peek

    
     looks like my head just popped outta the bushes 