Positive or Negative Feeling?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Nov 18, 2011.

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    Positive or Negative Feeling?

    Chapter 2 Part 3

    Editor: SensualPie

    Dedicated to: CheekyChloe, SensualPie and Shir_Sonatina
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    Later that day, at dinner

    "Oh, Mina. Why are you getting all irritated because of a little thing like that?" Mina's mother asked slightly exasperated.

    Mina's mother set 3 cups full of pigblood and pig meat on the table.

    "Cozi, open your mouth. Aaah." Mina's mother spoke to Cozi.

    "Hmm, your front teeth are growing bigger. We're going to have to trim it soon,"

    Cozi opened his mouth and smiled

    "Aww, cute little Cozi. Come to mama!"

    "MOTHER!"

    "Are we just going to go over this again? We had to move last time because of Cozi. Mother..." Mina said.

    "Oh, Mina you've got to try and understand Cozi. He's only a kid besides you sometimes slip too," Mina's mother got up to refill Cozi's cup of pigblood.

    "Wait, little Cozi. Mama will go and refill you cup," Mina's mother cooed to Cozi.

    "When did I ever....?" Mina began before freezing.

    Oh right...that incident...with that boy...

    "No I never did!" Mina said quickly, flustered.

    "Ah...you are so forgetful. Don't you remember? You did it one in a cafe...or was it a bread shop?" Mina's mother said returning with Cozi's cup.

    "Whatever, I'm just sick and tired of moving houses all the time. So, I'm going to try and be on my best behaviour and you better be on your best behaviour, Cozi" Mina spoke and quickly gulped down her dinner.

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  2. Pls ignore typos
     
  3. How do you make your words blue!?
     
  4. This is awesome. You are awesome :)
     
  5. See? I might not do it though... I always fail
     
  6. Hope this works...
     
  7. Yes! I did it!! 
     
  8. Sorry for spamming this thread with my colour comments ><
     
  9. God_Is_My_Judge you have to do and write words in the space. You can change the word 'blue' to any colour you want but some colours are not available. 
     
  10. PIMD erased it! 
     
  11. It is '' and '' but without the '
     
  12. They erased it again!!  sorry can't help you 
     
  13. It's OkDun Make Me Jealous!
     
  14. Dan, you do it like this

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    Only take the 6 out