I love your story it's great!! I realised the names are Japanese... Are you Japanese? I'm not but I like reading Japanese manga that's how the name Reina Kojima came about
Ok.ok imma update now... ------------------------------------------ Positive or Negative Feeling? Chapter 2 Part 2 ----------------------------------------- Mina held her schoolbag tightly still nervous about the incident that had happened earlier while she waited for her younger brother, Cozi, to come out. Mina checked her watch for the 10th time as Cozi had still not come out. Finally, the bell rang and Cozi came out with loads of students. "Oi, Cozi. Hurry up!" Mina yelled. Cozi deliberately turned away. "Hey Cozi, why is your name Cozi? It sounds so unique...It's like so cool...your name..." spoke a girl who was standing next to Cozi.. "Cozi, I uh..." Cozi stared at the girl's black eyes. "I uh..like you!" "Oh..no...I said it ...I said the L word!" the girl muttered. Cozi did not smile nor laugh, he instead sniffed the air. "Yummy...Yummy thing!" Cozi said out loud and continued to sniff the air. The girl stared at Cozi frightened. Mina saw Cozi and sighed. "Shut Up, Cozi!" she hissed before quickly coming and dragging Cozi by the arm to a taxi. ---------------------------------------------- By the way, Cozi is a first grader. feedback please!