Positive or Negative Feeling?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Akimoto_Komachi (01), Nov 18, 2011.

  1. ANYWAyz THIS is on page 27 the first one...

    Btw BUMPDATE!!!
     
  2. I magically posted a blank

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  3. You did white colour coding. I know that trick.
     
  4. See what I mean??
     
  5. then that means

    I CAN FINALLY DO COLOR CODING!
     
  6. BumpTODAY IS THE DAY,THE DAY YOU POST SOMETHING HERE AND I WANT A LONG ONE
     
  7. Yup, Aki! It's Friday!! 
     
  8. Princess Deokman,may we please have an update? 






     
  9. I

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    Update

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    Long

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    Pls

     
  10. Updaattteeeeee
     
  11. Update,Princess!! 
     
  12. Chillax! I just got back from my taekwondo lessons.
     
  13. It's Reaching The 300th Post
     
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    Positive or Negative Feeling?

    Chapter 3 Part 1

    Editor: -Shir_Sonatina-

    Dedicated to: CheekyChloe and SensualPie and -Shir_Sonatina-
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    "Hey, Sophie? I heard you invited Jared out to a date. What happened? Tell me all the details!!"

    "Ugh, Who would hate me? Jared blushed and became extremely shy. He was so cute! He suggested that since we don't know each other much, we just try and be friends first," a simpering voice said.

    Sophie lifted her head out proudly and tried to act dignified.

    "Wow really?"

    "OMG, Sophie, you're amazing!

    "It's nothing really. I mean who would not like me?" Sophie said trying to act shy. Trying....and failing.

    Sophie lifted a bit of her short blonde hair and covered her expression.

    [Crimson is Sophie's thoughts]

    UGH! You idiot Jared. How dare you!

    Sophie bit her lip in anger.


    -Flashback-


    Two days ago

    Jared wiped his sweat off with a towel and suddenly froze when he heard footsteps towards him and saw a blonde.

    Jared looked up with showing the faintest expression.

    "Hey, Jared. I saw you play basketball and you were so cool. You're really good at basketball. I was bored and I stopped by to watch and my heart fluttered and butterflies appeared in my stomach," Sophie said trying best to appear coy.

    "So?" asked Jared with a bored expression as if he got this treatment everyday.

    "Let's go out on a date," Sophie said bluntly giving up attempts on trying to appear coy.

    "What?" Jared asked in disbelief.

    "Let's go out on a date," Sophie repeated.

    "What nonsense are you saying?" Jared snorted.

    "Oh my! You must not know who I am. Fine, I'll introduce myself to you.

    "My name is Sophie. I am 10th Grade the same grade as you. I'm really smart so I achieve top marks. My hobbies are playing the piano and tennis. My family is really rich. I mean it's the size of the school. Plus I'm really pretty,"Sophie said smirking.

    Jared scratched his head in confusion.

    "So, this pretty and smart girl is asking you out. I think you and I are on the same level. Don't you think that you should go out on a date with me?" Sophie asked confidently.

    "You must be one of those girls who think highly of themselves. Nope. I mean what do you know about me?" Jared replied.

    "Aww...you're so clueless in a cute way. That's why I'm asking that we go out. So that we can know each other better." Sophie spoke smirking and full of confidence.

    Sophie strided forward and leaned in to Jared.

    "Nope, I don't want to," Jared said ducking.

    "Why?" Sophie asked fustrated.

    "Am I not pretty?"

    "You're pretty."

    "So, let's go out"

    "Nope, I don't want to,"

    "Why don't you want to?"

    "Because I don't want to."

    UGH! This..this annoying boy

    "Stop wasting your time and go bother someone else because I don't even want to date you even the slightest bit," Jared declared and turned to grab his bag.


    Sophie ran forward and grabbed Jared's arm," LET'S GO OUT!"

    Jared glared at Sophie, "LET GO OF MY ARM!"

    "Don't touch me with your dirty hand!" Jared sneered.

    "D...d...irty?" Sophie repeated flabbergasted.

    -End of flashback-

    I've never been that embarrassed. But I'm not going to wait! I'm going to win Jared over!

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    You got what you wanted. Now I want to get some rest.

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