---???---- Ace walked in and threw his shirt on the coat hanger. I shook my head. "Ace, when'll you ever learn?" Ace just sneered at me as if telling me he had just survived hell. Which he did afterwards. "... Yeah. The chic called me "HAWT" in front of my own class. Crazy typical blonde slut..." I laughed. Humans were so keen to even lose their virginity just to fit in! "Ha... Humans. They never change." Ace nodded. "... And who's the chic you've been seeing?" "... Apparently she has a boyfriend." I nodded again. "... But no matter. I shall see to this once Julian has given me an oppurtunity." "... I doubt it." ---- I sat on the bed thinking of how to do the damn homework... Then my phone rang. "Hey Joey! Yeah... Mhmm... K... Yep... Done... Thanks!" I threw the phone behind my shoulders and giggled. Joey is always there to help me... He's a life saver!" ---_ I'll continue later. Let ypur thoughts swim around the ocean waves...
No offense, but u use too much names. For ex: Zoe kissed Joey's cheek and Joey hugged Zoe. Instead, u can write: Zoe kissed Joey's cheek and hugged her back. See the diff??? Just trying to help
Listen to criticism but NEVER think that your story is bad. Btw, you're an awesomely talented writer!
Maybe you don't understand. THE SCISSORS I PUT BY MY TUB WHICH IS SEVEN FEET AWAY SLICED MY LEG OPEN!!!