Playful Kiss

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iTony (01), Aug 10, 2011.

  1. I haven't been on in a month and I get 3 updates)': all well Im still in love with this story!
     
  2. So then can some1 else finish it like mordic
     
  3. [Doesn't matter. Lol.]
     
  4. Please don't stop this story!
     
  5. Did I just put that in barracks.. Lmfao. I'll try today or tomorrow. Today's a half day and tomorrow's no school.
     
  6. Yay long life playful kiss lol
     
  7. ***Warning: This is the last update.***
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    Tony heard some screaming from a familiar voice so he ran down and saw Leliah drowning. He stepped inside the water but then he saw that a life guard already has jumped in. That life guard carried her back. That lifeguard was Trevor. Leliah was trembling, still shocked. Tony walked up to Trevor. "I'll take her from here.." Leliah pressed herself against Trevor and he just passed by Tony. Trevor set Leliah down next to her dad as he was yelling at himself for being trapped under the sand, unable to save her. Tony's parents were asking her if she was alright and if she wanted to go home. She was fine and she didn't want to go home. Tony was sitting on the sand, looking at the water, depressed.

    They went home after their shot trip to the beach and after that day, they went on their first day of college. Dorms, parties, new people, new interests, and all that combined. Time flew by and they had a short time to visit home because of spring break. Tony's wedding with Charlie was appointed to the Saturday during the spring break. But their's wasn't the only one. Trevor has proposed to Leliah a while back, appointing their wedding during spring break too. Tony and Leliah had to ride in one car together and they walked home together also. Tony only found out about her wedding just then so he was taken by surprise. As they were walking under the same umbrella that Tony held in his hand, under the same rain, he stopped walking but Leliah kept going, into the rain.

    "Don't marry Trevor."
    Those words rang in Leliah's head, stopping her and turning her around to face Tony.
    "Who are you to tell me what I do?" There was a very brief moment of silence, besides the sound of rain colliding with the umbrella and slamming against the ground.
    "You're marrying Charlie. I'm not doing anything to control you, right? But you're telling me to not marry Trevor?" She was soaked in the rain.
    Tony walked up to Leliah.

    "I'm saying this because I'm not marrying Charlie. I'm marrying the girl I love. I'm marrying the girl in front of me."
    Tony dropped the umbrella to the side and he kissed Leliah as she willingly kissed back. They were both soaking wet and they walked in their home.
    "Mom. Dad. I'm marrying Leliah." Tony stated with a smile on his face.
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    The End.
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    I finished my first story. I may make another one. Probably not.
     
  8. Such a sweet, yet slightly cutoff ending
     
  9. Awww tht was soo cute
     
  10. Oh.. About the early marriages, my bad. I just wanted to end this story so I don't have to worry about keeping you guys waiting. Hmm, a bit of a cheesy ending but that's the best I could do.
     
  11. Nice ending but I wanna know what happens to them! 
     
  12. They have a son. The son goes through the same thing his dad did. That's what happens. Lol.
     
  13. Lol what's happens to charle
     
  14. Use your imagination.