Perfection ~ The Not So Perfect Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by ashleemac14, Oct 9, 2012.

  1. New update should be posted by tonight.
     
  2. Turns out I'm not finished yet, I shall post when given the chance.
     
  3. Just started reading this.....I'm in love!!!!!  you've got yourself a new fan
     
  4. Aww yay anyways just bumping to post my update in a few.
     
  5. It's getting harder and harder to write these new updates. Which sadly sometimes means longer times. Anyways sorry for your wait. Enjoy.

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    A sudden buzzing noise startled me awake. My phone was vibrating on my nightstand, telling me to wake up. Another day of school and another day getting stared at by Jonas. Before, it was ok and I kinda liked it, but now it was just plain creepy.

    I slipped into some red skinnies and pulled a fitted black henley top of my head. The sleeves were only three-quarter length so, I slid on some thin silver bangles. My bed head looked sincerely dreadful and taming it was as well. I ended up finally getting a straightener to do it's job to my hair after 45 minutes of frustration. I tried to look nicer than just a normal school day. This is the day that I would ask Sam. I spent all night gathering the nerves to tell him how I felt.

    My lungs filled with air, taking a deep breath before I walked outside to meet him. I had to tell him now or I'd talk myself out of it. His eyes met mine, a smile forming on his face. A breeze rustled his short, blonde hair and I cracked a smile. I couldn't take it anymore and I had to go over there, but my black vans couldn't move. I was frozen, my nerves had taken over.

    All the sudden, his hands were on my shoulders. The touch made my heartbeat quicken and the rest of my frozen body melt. I took my chance, my lips met his and I could feel him smile even more. It was more than I could ever ask for. I pulled away before I couldn't anymore. My hands unclenched his jacket and began to smoothen out the wrinkles I caused.

    "S-sorry. " I barely managed to say before I was interrupted.

    "Don't be." Sam assured me.

    "I don't want to be your friend anymore. Well, just your friend." I admitted to him.

    "Oh well. I think I can live with that just fine." Sam answered me. He pulled me into him, his hold on me was different. It wasn't like all the other times before, this time I was in boyfriend's arms. It sounded right. Boyfriend. It wasn't awkward at all, like it was always supposed to be this way.

    We arrived at school, hand in hand. A few people turned to see, the main one being Jonas. His eyes were filled with anger. The jealousy coursed through his veins as his face turned red from it. He looked like he would attack at any moment, but he didn't. He just stood there. He just stared us both down.

    Jen ran to me, open armed. She almost suffocated me from the hug I received. Armando wasn't too far behind her and he was holding her binder. I could see what she saw in him and what he saw in her. They were perfect for each other and they knew it.

    "I'm so happy ya'll are finally together." Jen sang gleefully.
     
  6. buuuummmmmpppppssss omg bumps
     
  7. Bump  Sam sounds H-O-T.
     
  8. BUMPITY BUMPPP
     
  9. Sam IS hot lmao.
    Jonas is cute but... I've vowed silence.

    Teeheehee.
     
  10. Jonas is a Stalker nothin cute bout that eww


    SAAAAMMM though makes this gal go DAMMMNN at his hotness levels
     
  11.  Well um since I know everyone who inspired the character of Sam.... I'd confirm that they are indeed good looking. But so are the Jonas inspirers....... I'm impartial to my characters......
     
  12. Ashlee I think you're lying about being impartial to your characters  I mean If I based my story off real people I'd let my feelings flow from them to my writing. Maybe you're slowly leaking those emotions? Cuz you got me hooked
     
  13. Bump. Bump. And Bump again! Love it!!!
     
  14. Bump 
     
  15. I don't lieok maybe that was a teensy lie, but anyways I like both the Sam and Jonas inspirers. I just have a thing for dark stories too
     
  16. Also a new update is being written. I stopped writing to focus on a contest entry, but now I'm back here.