perfect guy

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *katy1221 (01), Oct 24, 2011.

  1. Really good so far
     
  2. This is a freaking good story BUMP
     
  3. 9 months later...
    "Max!!" what "I'm in labor" oh crap let's go. So we hopped in the car and raced to the hospital but as we turned the corner a car hit us. " oh no!" I screamed and then every thing went black.
     
  4. Omg I want more 2 read diz is so interresting lol write on my wall when u write more k plz nd thx
     
  5. Srry my update was short write more soon. Thx for liking my story.
     
  6. love this storyplz notify me when there's morethanks
     
  7. I woke up in a hospital bed I looked down at my stomach "were's my baby" I screamed. "it's ok he's with the nurses" max said then I passed out.
     
  8. update.........please, need longer updates
     
  9. I woke up and looked around the hospital room. " max can I hold the baby " max looked at me and began to cry "oh no please tell me its not true" I begged him. "I can't he sobbed" tears streamed down my face. "no" I could barley breath. "max weve lost everything." no we havent we still have each other" max said.
     
  10. Hope u guys like my story