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Julie's POV I ran towards the food courts. At least there I could eat. I was being chased by about a hundred dead-things, and I only had some arrows and a bow to fend them off. I ran with my long, black hair streaming behind me, with my big, sea-green eyes filled with fear. As soon as I thought the infected people had lost me, I swiped a water bottle and a hot pretzel and took a small break to eat. That was all it took for the dead things to gain on me. I ran, but I was wheezing. The last thing I remember before I passed out in a clothing store, were a few faces looming over me, their eyes filled with concern. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Sorry for the short update! :/ I will make it longer next time!