Parasite

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AdamGontier (01), Jun 16, 2012.

  1. Amanda's POV

    I was still angry at Anthony after I was done. All he did was stand still and look pretty. That won't get you anywhere in the situation we're in. Usually I would've never hit Anthony in anger. But, he just makes me feel anger that i've never felt before.

    It wasn't just him. Everything was gnawing at me. The infected, the parasites and just the utter chaos that was surrounding this. It was wearing me down mentally and physically. I was literally losing my sanity.

    I looked back at Adam. He got up and walked to my side. I sighed and picked up the bat and handed it ti Anthony. I took my golf club out of my duffel bag and swung it a few times. Anthony flinched every time.

    I carefully opened the gate and was shocked. I didn't see one parasite or any infected. But I had a bad feeling bout it. "This doesn't feel right..." I muttered lifting the gate all the way.

    Adam heard me and nodded in agreement. Then Anthony quietly spoke. "Well... We should take advantage of this." I turned to Anthony and gave him a smile.

    "That's the most sensible thing you've said all day." Anthony nodded and avoided eye contact.

    I stepped forward and looked around. "I agree with Anthony. Let's take advantage of this. You two ready?" Adam and Anthony nodded and I grinned.

    "Good, now lets get going." I picked up my duffel bag and began to walk. When we turned the corner I saw something that nobody could have prepared me for.
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    I wrote this really early so if theres any mistakes. Blame the stupid sun for waking me up.
     
  2. Bumpitty bumpy bump!!
     
  3. Good update! Now Adam update lol
     
  4. Ahhhh me... Must... Know... UPDATE ADAM!!!!!
     
  5. I agree with amanda... UPDATE ADAM
     
  6. Your update is written. Amanda, being my best friend, gets first look. I'm waiting for her reply.
     
  7. Adam's POV

    Holy ****! I thought to myself almost falling backwards at the sight of the giant before us. It had to be at least thirty feet tall, and fifteen feet wide. Its legs were like long daggers, its brown-colored, sharply pointed, legs made me almost cower with fear.

    Its footsteps made a thundering sound as it trudged towards us. "Holy ****!" I exclaimed, grabbing the shotgun.

    "How are we supposed to beat that?" She asked, emphasizing that .

    "I have to get in close." I said holding up the shotgun. This was the craziest thing I'd ever do.

    I ran towards it as fast as I could, holding my heavy shotgun. It swung a leg at me, and hit me in the stomach before I grabbed onto it.

    I screamed in pain as I attempted to climb up it's leg, but falling to my back on the ground. I writhed in pain, as a sharp, stab-like feeling came searing through my back, feeling the force of hitting the ground. My face was plastered with fear, and I felt absolutely helpless.

    That's when I saw the most fearful thing I could have ever imagined. It looked down on me through colossal eyes as the area right below its blank eyes started to crack apart, exposing gigantic teeth, sharper than razors. It opened it a seemingly never-ending hole. It was going to try to eat me.

    I came up with possibly the dumbest plan of all. I staggered up, still in pain. This was unreal! it swiftly came down, ready to snap me in-between its razor-sharp teeth. But before the jaws snapped me in half, I jumped inside. I slid down what was a narrow hole I believed to be its throat.

    I slid down until I fell into a deep pool of slimy green acid like stuff. It was strong enough to burn, but not fully disintegrate my skin. It was dark, and had a fowl smell. Dim light protruded into the pit of the stomach I was in.

    I swam up, my eyes burning from the acidic liquid. I couldn't see much at all. I managed to hold onto my shotgun the whole way, with much difficulty.

    I was in the stomach of a parasite. Well, who is really the parasite now? Me, that's who. I have officially lived to the fullest.

    My head was barely above the liquid, and my face was still dripping with it. I was at the top of the stomach though, and this was going to be my exit point. I was completely oblivious to the havoc it was wreaking, until I fell back under with all the shaking. I held on tight to my shotgun.

    I swam back up, taking a breath. I am going to run out of air if I didn't hurry this up. I slowly dragged my shotgun up from the slimy liquid and pointed it straight up.

    I took a shot, exploding a hole into it's back. I could see the light of the mall again, and I grabbed on the edge of the gaping wound. I pulled up as the giant swung frantically in pain trying to get me off of him.

    I finally got up onto his back as the acid slid off of me, dripping onto the giants back. It was still shaking violently, and it made me slip off its hard shell. I held onto the side for my life!

    My shotgun slipped too, and was falling before I grabbed it with one arm, and held on with the other. I swung my shotgun up, landing it heavily on the giant's back.

    I pulled myself up, trying not to fall again as it shook violently. I stepped carefully to the giant's head, stumbling along the way. I cocked the shotgun with one hand, keeping balance with the other.

    I took one shot and watched as the giants head blew up into shards. Slime was now pouring out of its hole once known as it's head. It started to fall, and I thought for sure I was going to die.

    It fell, I could feel the force as it seemed to fall down slowly. At the last minute, when it was just 8 feet from the ground, I jumped off, rolling on my side as I hit the ground, gasping for breath. The pain was riveting as it caught up with me.

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    Holy ****! Tough to kill!
     
  8. Three words:

    Oh. My. God.
     
  9.  OH MY FLIPPING GOSH THAT IS CRAZY AHH UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
     
  10. Did you really need to get eaten?
     
  11. Wheres flubber when I need a perverted joke! Lol
     
  12. AHHH NOT FLUBBER 
     
  13. Why not the flubber 