Parasite

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *AdamGontier (01), Jun 16, 2012.

  1. This is so good! So,very good. BUMP!
     
  2. Amanda's POV

    I looked at Adam and whimpered. My heart was racing and no where felt safe. I shuffled my feet as I saw the blood spilt all over him. I walked over and touched his shoulder. "A-are you alright?" He simply nodded and stood up straight. I looked around us and shuddered. The walls seemed to ooze with blood.

    "W-what's happening?" Adam shook his head "I have no idea." He then took my hand and placed the butcher knife in it. "Here" I looked at the knife and shuddered. I looked around and sighed in relief. No one else was in sight.

    I looked at bodies on the floor and cried out. There on the floor, next to a mall bench. Was the broken body of my sister. I covered my mouth and tears slipped down my cheeks. I prayed silently that all of this would be over soon.

    I glanced down at the parasite and shuddered again. "What are those things?"
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    Short i know... Don't yell at me
     
  3. I'm yelling at you!!! Kidding! Ha
     
  4. You made me cry! lol jk
     
  5. Holy hell... This is like so amazingly good...  WOOO!!! bump
     
  6. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. Lol i know it didn't work
     
  8. Hahaha hi its adams turn!!!
     
  9. ADAM IT'S YOUR TURN!
     
  10. "A parasite." I said, still looking at the dead thing on the floor.

    "Well, I knew that! What kind?" She asked irritant.

    "I don't know. There has never been a parasite this...evolved." I said trailing off a bit.

    I remembered the girl that was running, and started heading her direction. I came through a set of glass doors, before stepping into a small clothing shop. She was sitting there.

    "Is it gone?" She asked, scared out of her mind.

    "It's gone." I said, sitting down next to her.

    The clothing shop was torn up, clothes on the floor, racks knocked over, and windows cracked. The creatures obviously came here earlier. I looked at the girl who then started talking.

    "How can I ever thank you?" She said winking at me.

    "Two things. Your name, and put some clothes on." She wasn't naked, as I said, but close to it.

    "Erin. And I do have clothes on!" She was getting irritated now.

    "Barely." I said rolling my eyes.

    I took her hand, and helped her up. But I think she purposely tripped on me, because she fell right on top of me. She seemed to lay there for 5 seconds before finally getting up.

    "I'm so sorry." She obviously lied.

    "You're in the middle of monsters, and you're flirting with me." I said pointing out her wrongs.

    "It's what I'm good at." She said smirking.

    Well, I guess we are gonna need bait. She is way too stupid to survive anyway. But, as a good person, I should probably protect her.

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    That's right, we now have that ONE promiscuous woman.
     
  11. Lol shall I do my part?