Paradise Lost

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by AaronRodgers, May 26, 2011.

  1. Wow honey very good... More please 
     
  2. Wonderful
     
  3. I get the 50.Cal
     
  4. Yay!!!!! I'm in there!!!!!! love u! Haha
     
  5. Charlie walked into the house am everyone jumped up from their seats. "I've got good news and bad news. The good news is he'll survive, the bad news is... We don't have beer." everyone laughed, they were all relieved, especially Blizz. No one knew that Blizz and Bun were brothers until now.

    Over the next couple days they stayed in the safe house, charlie would go buy groceries, he was the only one who could actually go out into public without being shot at.

    A year passed, Eric and Shelby get married, they finnally realized how much they love each other. Justin and Eric planned to go on a trip, to go hunt. So out they went, they found some deer, but when Justin raised his rifle a shot went off, but not from either of their guns. Justin had a bullet flying through his head at 200 mph, he was dead before he hit the ground, Eric identified the shooter, he recognized him, he was called The Suburban Legend. He fires again, but only hitting Eric below his heart. "Any last words?" The Legend approached Eric, Eric looked up, and using his own handgun, quickly shot The Legend, and they both died. Three bodies in the forest.

    Chapter 1: Welcome to Hell

    Eric looked around, Justin and The Legend stood next to him. They were in a city, but this city looked like a city that just exited war. Buildings smoked and burned, people wandered the streets, beaten and bloody. The city was littered with fecal matter and other bodily waste products. Eric stops a man, he looked tired and hungry, he was very bloody. "Where are we?" the man just smiled at Eric "Welcome to Hell, you're dead." and he walked away.
     
  6. Wow that was very unexpected turn 
     
  7. Gosh darn it. I am a horrible shot. Haha lol. Wat a cameo. Love it too
     
  8. Darn? We all gotta dies tuh stay in the story!
     
  9. No, I'll go back and forth between the living and dead
     
  10. Ooh! Do i smell my "force" idea?
     
  11. I WAS SO YOUNG!!
     
  12. Lol Justin.. Dint worry
     
  13. *Does middle finger*That's for you suburban!!I'm Jk lol
     
  14. -insert rude comment that would get me banned here- 
     
  15. O.O

    Hell...
     
  16. What an unexpected turn.....
     
  17. Well then....that's um.....unexpeced?o_O