Paradise Lost

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by AaronRodgers, May 26, 2011.

  1. Ok, I'll try to work you in
     
  2. Bro this is awesome, can I be in it?
    And where have u been dude?
     
  3. U said u would try to work me in remember?!
     
  4. Dont worry people, this is practically the prologue
     
  5. Did i ask for a spot yet?
     
  6. As The Villa was being cleared Eric thought of his own family, he thought of his sister and his parents, his brother whom was at war. Eric always dreamt of being a soldier, killing hundreds of bad guys and then come home a hero, but it didn't work out like that, it was nothing like the movies and video games he grew up with, he knew now that killing was horrible, no matter who the victim was. Justin was still an emotional wreck. Danzo got behind the wheel of the armored van, Eric, justin, and Shelby piled in the back. Eric knew that he was in love with Shelby, but that had to stop now, if Shelby died, the emotional damage would kill Eric as it is, but if they were dating, or even married, her death would drive him insane, Eric thought of this as he dozed off in the van.

    The van stopped, the door opened and two men walked In, one holding a gun, the other just standing there, Eric looked up and only saw they're outline, it was dark outside, it was wet. One man walked forward and grabbed Eric by the arm and tugged him up, Eric notices that Justin and Shelby werent there, did they sell him out to the Feds? Eric was lead to a car, inside was Justin and Shelby, both looking at Eric with large eyes, "Who are you?" Eric was a little mad, but not mad enough to kill. "Friends." the man with the gun just looked at Eric... "Just sit tight, we will be there soon.." Eric looked around more, "Champaign?" The man without the gun offered Eric a glass, "No thanks." Eric turned this down, he knew that alcohol is what put him here in the first place, so he knew that he would drink for a long time. "But I insist." the man became very persuasive, Eric saw everyone else drinking "Just one glass."

    Within 30 minutes Eric was drunk, and passed out.
     
  7. As The Villa was being cleared Eric thought of his own family, he thought of his sister and his parents, his brother whom was at war. Eric always dreamt of being a soldier, killing hundreds of bad guys and then come home a hero, but it didn't work out like that, it was nothing like the movies and video games he grew up with, he knew now that killing was horrible, no matter who the victim was. Justin was still an emotional wreck. Danzo got behind the wheel of the armored van, Eric, justin, and Shelby piled in the back. Eric knew that he was in love with Shelby, but that had to stop now, if Shelby died, the emotional damage would kill Eric as it is, but if they were dating, or even married, her death would drive him insane, Eric thought of this as he dozed off in the van.

    The van stopped, the door opened and two men walked In, one holding a gun, the other just standing there, Eric looked up and only saw they're outline, it was dark outside, it was wet. One man walked forward and grabbed Eric by the arm and tugged him up, Eric notices that Justin and Shelby werent there, did they sell him out to the Feds? Eric was lead to a car, inside was Justin and Shelby, both looking at Eric with large eyes, "Who are you?" Eric was a little mad, but not mad enough to kill. "Friends." the man with the gun just looked at Eric... "Just sit tight, we will be there soon.." Eric looked around more, "Champaign?" The man without the gun offered Eric a glass, "No thanks." Eric turned this down, he knew that alcohol is what put him here in the first place, so he knew that he would drink for a long time. "But I insist." the man became very persuasive, Eric saw everyone else drinking "Just one glass."

    Within 30 minutes Eric was drunk, and passed out.
     
  8. Sorry for double post
     
  9. If Eric and Shelby don't date...
     
  10. Hey! Im gonna eat you!
     
  11. Eric awoke in a elegant bedroom. He had no clue where he was, all he remember was entering the car where he got drunk. Eric sits up and looks at a bedside clock, it was 8 am.
    Eric exits the room to find himself In a long hallway, Justin stepped out of the room infront of the one Eric woke up In, he looked hungover... "What happened last night?" Eric scratched his head, "You met my old friends Bun and Blizz.. They both work together to run a big drug and firearms business" Justin was smiling "Where else did you think we got that minigun?" Justin and Eric smell bacon, a food neither of them have eaten for months, they sprint downstairs to find food on the table, crepes with bacon, egg, and fruit. Justin sits down and starts wolfing his plate down. Eric sits down and grabs a fork, his grandma used to make him crepes when he was younger, she would butter it and put sugar on it, he could eat a million of them. Blizz walks in, "G'morning friends! Did you sleep well? I hope so." Eric still felt a little hungover, he can't remember drinking so much that he has no reculection of last night. "Hurry up boys, we're going hunting!" Eric looks up a Blizz... "Are you serious?" Eric knew that the gunshot would only worsen his headache. "Of course I'm serious, we need some venison for tonight." for a drug lord he was pretty fancy and relaxed, weirdly it reminded him of scarface or the godfather. Bun walks in holding on to a 12 gauge shotgun, "Hurry up! We don't have all day!" Bun looked irritated, he must be an impatient man. "You guys go ahead, we'll catch up later." the two of them left and Justin looked at Eric "So what do you think?" Eric had to think... "Are they gay?" Eric smiled at Justin, he was mainly asking this cause he didn't wanna wake up with semen in his face. "Of course not!"

    They sat In the living room, watching a 85" tv, the news was on and it was talking about the battle in the mountains, and apparently Justin, Shelby, Danzo, and Eric were on the FBIs most wanted. "Hey where's Danzo?" it seemed that Danzo was only around when least expected, he was a strange man, but cool. "He's probally hunting, dont worry about it."
    They were watching some old movies when they heard police sirens in the driveway "COME OUT WITH YOUR HANDS UP!!!" Justin and Eric exchange glances of fear an panic.
     
  12. Im not gay  lol
     
  13. I want a character Aaron
     
  14. And again I'm still not in there
     
  15. You will be soon