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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by NeonQueen, Nov 14, 2011.
-I chuckle and jump with her in my arms-
(Scratch that)
-I make a feign to drop her-
- I scream - Sal!!
-I laugh and jump with her in my arms-
- I brace myself for cold water -
-We hit the water with a big splash. The water is warm due to the hot springs that flow into it-
- the water turns out to be warm, and I swim to the surface -
-I surface beside her and laugh-
- I splash him - Thats what you get
-I laugh and splash her back- "And that's what you get."
Hey! I didn't do anything
-I smile- "I know."
(please check out my new story "burning the rain" -- thank you guys
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- I laugh, enjoying myself-
(you probably know what I'm gonna say)
(What? ) -I laugh- "You make me so happy."
( i hate my ipod! It died and wouldn't charge )