OUTSIDERS OF PIMD

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Wing_Fanchu_Skullduggery (01), Mar 21, 2011.

  1. Yep cause I'm running his ass over with a ford raptor.
     
  2. I will update soon. Trust me
     
  3. Otto jumped forward with such force that the part of the building he was standing on collapsed. He was on Zach in seconds. The blast was released. Right in Zach's chest. No chance of dodging or blocking. Zach hit the barrier once again. He fell to the ground. It seemed like he wasn't breathing. Otto ran up to him on all fours, still overtaken, and stabbed him repeatedly. Then jumped back, and sent forth a huge blast of darkness energy up to the top of the barrier. It cracked. The cracks spread. Then the entire barrier broke and fell down. Otto looked at where his friends were hiding. His lips twitched into a demented smile, and then he opened his mouth. A ball formed. Then they noticed that the same ball was being formed in each hand. They all ran for cover. Qin transformed into an eagle, and flew off. She knew what would happen. Roy, Fletch, Cyber, and Epic rushed forward to engage him. But they were too late. He fired off the blast. Stewie and Sophie were trying to run. They weren't sure what happened. That entire building was destroyed. That angered them. They charged at Otto. But hit a barrier. Otto smirked again. He sent another blast of darkness at Epic and Cyber. The blast was stopped. The barrier worked against him as well... Unless... He turned around. There, all bloody and weak stood Zach.
    "I don't care about those buffoons if that's what you were wondering. We aren't finished here that's all. I don't need you escaping. I have to admit, your transformation is impressive. I wont transform myself. That shall stay hidden up my sleeve for now. Just know one thing before you die. Look at my face. Look at the features you can see... Do you recognize them? No? Well then I guess there isn't a human sense left in you. Cos you should feel fear. And lots of it!" and with that he jumped forward. He struck Otto in the stomach. With the palm of his hand. And it came all the way through and out his back. Zach removed his hand. Otto now lay on the ground, spitting out blood. His hair turned grayish now. He looked up at Zach. From his angle he could now see all of Zach's face. He jumped up suddenly.
    "No!!! Impossible! Absolutely impossible! Are you who I think you are?!?!" Otto was losing it. He fell to his knees. This was overwhelming. This man could not be... It was impossible. Zach smiled. He summoned a spear in the air.
    "Yes. I am exactly who you think I am. But there's no point telling my story to a dying man. Sorry. I was impressed at how you hurt me though. If only you gave in to the thing more. 50% was not enough. Why did you hold back?"
    "I wasn't the one holding back. He was... Bored. He wanted to play with you. But he's lost all control for the moment. There's a limit to his hold on me still."
    "Well then, while you're weak and he can't have hold, Goodbye."
    The spear flew from the air behind him straight through Otto's heart. Otto swayed, blood spraying from the wound, and then fell to the ground, dead. The barrier collapsed. Zach staggered, jumped in the air, and disappeared. And so started the end of the world...
     
  4. I think that I will end part 1 with that... 

    Trolololololol
     
  5. Made the thread for part 2 if you're curious.
     
  6. I just realized: in 8 days it will be exactly a year since my first update. Spread the word, everyone!!!
     
  7. Damn. This story is way too long or you take too long to update.
     
  8. There was a six month hiatus if you remember.
     
  9. Use English. I might be smart but not that smart.
     
  10. Hiatus? Oh it's just a general writer's term meaning a break from writing a particular story...
     
  11. That's what I thought but wasnt sure if there was another definition to that.
     
  12. CHEESE, CHEESE FOR EVERYONE!!!!