OUTSIDERS OF PIMD

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Wing_Fanchu_Skullduggery (01), Mar 21, 2011.

  1. Otto did u forget about Taylor? 
     
  2. No, Jodie will meet her there.
     
  3. Few i finally caught up with the story
     
  4. Lol long story huh?
     
  5. Lol I'm ready to read more hurry up and make the next scene! I'm excited
     
  6. Lol everybody is!
     
  7. No one cares what you think joe
     
  8. I really like my character, but didn't I chop the Epic Twins' heads off?
     
  9. They came back. One turned to ice, the other turned to fire.
     
  10. Jodie looked around. She was in a dark place, and she could see nothing.
    'where The hell am I, Apoc? What the hell is going on?'
    'you are in my consciousness. And so will you join me?'
    'GO TO HELL APOC'
    'been there, done that. Id gladly return' said Apoc.
    'whats going on, Apoc? Who else is here?' asked Tay, stepping out of the shadows.
    'it's me, jodie, now RUN!!!!!!' she swung her arm, and Tay went flying out.
    'what the hell did you do?!?!?''apoc asked angrily. 'thats my girl!!!'
    'since when, Apoc? That's otto's sister!!!!! And you kidnapped her!!!'
    'Jodie, STFU before I kick your ass.' said Apoc, angrily.
    'oh so now u wanna kill me? Come on, show me what you got, Apoc.' jodie laughed, and then she was surrounded in darkness.

    Tay ran. She knew her way around the police building, but she knew Apoc's power, and also knew that he would be on her soon. She was at the front door when he appeared.
    'Going somewhere?' Apoc smiled.
    'Deja vu?' Taylor smiled. Then Apoc screamed.

    Jodie escaped the darkness and now was causing A's much damage to the ground A's she could. She just needed to bring him back here and distract him long enough for Tay to escape. Then Apoc came.
    'WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU FUVKING DOING IN MY BRAIN, YOU BITCH?!?!?!'
    'nothing, just killing some brain cells.' Jodie smiled
    'oh that's it, you're dead!!!!!!'
     
  11. No, ur moment will come in the next story
     
  12. Dumb jodiiee ._.