Our Kind of Relationship

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by CallMeNoona, Mar 23, 2012.

  1. BumpI don't have any feedback..
     
  2. ᏰᏌᎷᎮ!!
     
  3. FREAKIN BUMP
     
  4. Bump!!!!!!
     
  5. 
     
  6. Update pwease  I really like this story 
     
  7.  I wonder whats gonna happen. You always manage to leave cliffhangers.  Absolutely amazing story.
     
  8. Even once we got home there was nothing but silence between us... Of course Maria prances into the room like she always did and cooed over our silence and went straight to him.

    "I'm going to pack," I said sternly, not wanting to see her all over him.

    "Pack?" asked Maria.

    I looked at her and bit my lip. "You got what you wanted, I'm leaving," I said and I went upstairs. A while later there was a knock on my door.;;:;::::::::::::::::
     
  9. I LOVE IT AND LOVE THE SUSPENSE!
     
  10. NO I DIDN'T FINISH!!!
     
  11. THEN FINISH ITS AMAZING!
     
  12. Lmao excuse the ";;;;" I kinda went berserk... 

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    A while later there was a knock on my door. "What?"

    Adam walked in, and closed the door behind him. "I just wanted to say something..." he said in a serious tone.

    "What is it?"

    "What you said to Maria was unfair, you didn't need to speak to her like that, that was rude."

    "I was rude?! Me?! Have you seen how she is?! Even though we were married... even if it was just out of convenience, she was always all over you! I know we aren't in this marriage to have feelings, I still felt jealous!"

    "Jealous...?"

    "Damn it Adam! I just felt like... I was scared. I was scared that one day you'd choose her over Sarah and I... I couldn't bear the thought..."

    It only took him three steps to get to where I was. He grabbed my arm and pulled me into a warm hug.

    "No... Never... It'll always be you..." he said softly. "You going away is paining me at the moment, I'm trying to remain as calm as possible... but I can't..."

    "Adam..."

    "I won't let that guy take you away from me. I found you, we're married..."

    "I can't stay with you... He'll tell and you could get in trouble... Please... just don't stop talking to me, whether it's at school or at a coffee shop... Don't forget about us."

    "As if I could forget," he said and he kissed my cheek softly.

    I blushed. I wondered if he loved me... I could exactly tell if this was just a caring, brotherly type love he was showing... Or if he truly loved me.

    "Adam...?"

    "Hmm?"

    "Never mind... Just hold me a little longer..." I whispered sealing my arms around him.

    "As you wish," he said and he held me closer and tighter.

    I was going to miss this...
     
  13. :mad: Le bitch, Maria needs to pack.
    :3 and they need to make out already.
     
  14. AHHH just make them kiss already!!!

    My only feedback is keep writing how you do! You're freakin incredible!