Chapter 4 ~~~~~~~~~~~~Nikki'sP.O.V.~~~~~~~~ I was in. I can't believe I got in! I probably sound like I've just earned a spot on the cheerleading squad, but I'm not. I'm glad that guy didn't skewer me like a kabob. If that had happened, in heaven I would've been so upset that my halo and wings would droop. The "boss" opened the door and I saw the guys piled on top of one another eavesdropping. As the door opened they all fell to the floor in a big heap like a pile of laundry, except it's a pile of boys. Heaven baby :O! Just kidding, but anyway. The boys all tried standing and helping each other up but kept falling over one another. As they finally stood up, they all started talking at once. I heard bits of each sentence like: "How could you let her in-!" "Why is Cassandra in the gang-?!" "She's so hot-!" I have to admit I appreciated half of the compliment I heard- "Guys... Guys.. SHUT UP! KNOCK IT OFF ALL OF YOU!" the boss shouted. The boys all went silent immediately. "Thank you," the boss said. "Her name isn't Cassandra, it's Nikki. You have the wrong girl." The other 4 guys smacked Duke in the back of the head and were all like, "Come on man really?!" "Hey!" the boss yelled. The boys went quiet again. "She's going to be staying here for a month, if, if.." "Why is there always an 'if' in these sorts of things?" a red haired guy muttered to himself. "This is a good if," the boss stated. "She will stay for a month if all of you ladies approve of it." They all looked awe struck for a moment before huddling together with mixed whispers. After about a minute the huddle broke apart. "Well?" the boss asked. "I approve," a blonde haired guy said first. "Me too," a brown haired guy agreed. One kid with blue hair nodded his head. A red-haired guy also agreed with the rest. And that left Duke to approve last. Everyone leaned in a bit to hear his answer. ".....Yes..." he said at last. "She's all yours, guys," the boss said as he exited back into his office. All of the guys looked at me for a second. Duke gestured me to the front with him and he gave me a tour of the place. (I'm too lazy to type it all o-o) It took around 30 minutes before they showed me where I would be sleeping. Damn, this place was HUGE! And when I say huge I mean huge. The place was 4 stories complete with 3 bathrooms, 6 bedrooms, 2 game rooms, a living room, a kitchen, and the parking garage I was talking about earlier. They all led me back to the living room and introduced themselves to me. The blonde guy was Jet, the red haired guy was Dakota, the blue haired and silent one was Mako, and the brown haired guy was Chase. What they all specialized in was really shveet. Duke could talk anyone into anything, his voice was that talented. Mako had some mad ninja skills he demonstrated for me. Jet was really good with guns and Dakota was one for a knife, he threw them very accurately from afar. Chase showed off his code breaking and computer tactics. Meanwhile all I could do was throw a few punches and kicks. These guys were allot more superior than I. All of them could do these amazing things and I just had a good voice and a strong body. As soon as they were done explaining who they were themselves to me, Duke showed me to where I'd be staying. It wasn't much but it's all I pretty much needed; a bed, a long dresser, a night table, lamp, and a closet with some hangers. "Thanks," I said as I flopped on my back onto the bed. He looked a little uneasy then said, "No problem..." and just walked out. ~~~~~~~~~Duke'sP.O.V.~~~~~~ After we were all done introducing ourselves, I showed Nikki where she'd be sleeping. "Thanks," she said as she flopped on her back onto the bed. It took a little long for me to reply, then I finally said, "No problem..." and left the room. I walked back downstairs to where the guys were. They were all chilling on the couch and when I entered the room, they all looked up at me. "What?" I asked defensively. "You've got the wrong girl, dumbass, that's what," Jet said. "Well she looks allot like Cassandra, how was I supposed to know she was the wrong one?!" I shouted. "Dude, calm down," Dakota said. I sighed. "Sorry." Jet grinned mischievously. "But we've got at least a girl in our gang, am I right guys?" "Don't even think about it," Dakota scolded. "No promises," he said with the grin still flickering on his lips. "Ugh, you're such a pig," Chase said in disgust. Jet just laughed and got up from the couch. "Where are you going?" I asked in suspicion, eyeing him as he exited. He laughed kinda evilly and walked backwards out of the room and headed upstairs. "Ugh, he is just so... bleh!" Dakota stated. Mako laughed in agreement. I expected Jet to come back with a huge red slap mark on his face. ~~~~~~~~~~~Nikki'sP.O.V.~~~~~~~~~~~~ I was about to kick off my shoes and climb into bed when I heard a voice from behind me. "Sup, sexy?" I spun around and saw that Jet guy leaning against the door frame. "Oh, hey Jet," I said politely as I turned back around and sat down on the bed. I started untying the laces to my shoes when a huge shadow pushed me over and pinned me down on my back onto the bed. "What the hell are you do-" I was cut off when Jet kissed me for a minute very passionately. I closed my eyes and gave in since I couldn't really move. "Get off me." I pushed him back with all my might and he landed on his back on the other end of the bed. "Don't act like you didn't enjoy it," he said with a smirk. I was speechless for a moment there. "...That's not the point." "Hah! So you did like it huh?" he sat up and tried pinning me again but I dodged and he landed face first into the pillow on the bed. I rolled my eyes, turned him over, and slapped him across the face. "Here's your prize. Now get out of my room before I wack you in the head with my shoe." He sat up again and put an arm around me. I recoiled like a snake, took my shoe off my foot and hit him in the head with it. "Ouch! Jesus, woman!" Jet said as he held the back of his head. "I told you to get out of here before I did that didn't I?" I did the Master's trademark grin as I said it. "Alright alright I'll go." He looked like he was about to get up but then rushed back and kissed me again and ran out of the room to avoid getting hit by one of my shoes. What a fucking animal. Who does he think he is making out with every random chick that he sees? That's just so... ugh! And if any of you think I enjoyed that kiss I didn't... okay maybe a little, but that's not the point! The point is that he needs to know better than to kiss every girl he sees and thinks is hot. Someone should teach him to be completely silent like the kid Mako. Random Note: What do you guys think so far?? I don't usually say this but will you all comment and lemme know what you think or what I should do later on? Thanks! Byeee!
I love it. You grammar and stuff is great. But there's this tiny little thing… Nikki seems a little fake to me I don't know, I think it's just me. Personally if I was kissed by someone who kidnapped me I wouldn't take it so light with a "shoe threating". He would be one more punch until death -_- . I don't know, maybe it's just me. But either way I still love itKEEP ON WRITING!
Bump! Oh, yes roze. I would've just.. Kick him to death. Ok, doggy is safe for now. Only for now.
Good, yeah...she seems to be really cool and calm about the fact she's just Bern kidnapped by these complete strangers....but keep writing and i'll keep Reading!!
Tiff I didn't know you wrote in Fan-Fiction!! I love the story so far But I do agree with the people earlier... She was too easy to accept the job, and feel comfortable. But the story is still amazing! Keep it up! ~Justin