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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by MadKingSean, Feb 19, 2014.
Jack: Shrunken down, almost being stepped on. "Watch it!" He yells, shaking his fist at Patrick.
Patrick: Oh sorry didn't see you there buddy, I though I was alone in this abandon city
Jack: "You and me both, pal. Hey, got any food on ya?" He asks, crawling onto his shoe.
Patrick: Woah! What the heck are you?
Jack: "Well that's a little harsh, I could say the same thing to you, pal. Anyway, got any food?"
Patrick: Uh.. For one thing I don't know what your talking about and... There's an apple in my bag
Jack: He mocks his tone. "'What the heck are you?' I'm Jack, I can shrink."
Patrick: Well I won't give it to you if you'll be like that
Jack: "Okay... Fine... You win. I'm Jack... And you?"
Patrick: I'm Patrick, are you a mutant if some sort?
Jack: "Aren't we all?" He laughs.
Patrick: What exactly do you mean by that? -looks curious-
Jack: He sighs. "You don't catch on very fast, do ya?"
Mark: looks around at the prisoners.
Patrick: Not really... Ha
Jack: "So about that apple..."
Patrick: -Takes it out of my bag and hands it to him-
Jack: He smiles as he takes a bite. "Where ya heading?"
Patrick: ... Anywhere, just trying to get away
Jack: He makes himself comfortable on his shoe lace. "Me too." He says, closing his eyes.