Not Ready To Die

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Jan 23, 2012.

  1. AWH!! Bump
     
  2. I liked that one :) BUMP
     
  3. Bump..bumpity bumpy!!!
     
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    I watched him as he walked away down the hill. The rain splattered across my face..

    "Mike..." I weakly whispered.

    "Mike.....Mike!!!! MIKE!!!" I stood and ran to him realizing that I was letting him go.

    I jumped onto his back and he fell to the ground. He yelled in pain as his body hit the ground. His jacket was soaked in rain and my tears mingled in with it.

    "Mike. Please. Please hear me. I love you. Ivreally truly do mike. I'm never going to feel this way over anyone else. I swear I'll wait for you."

    I whispered.

    I actually felt him. Could he feel me? Could he see me??

    He stood and I fell off of him weeping at another desperate failure to get him to see me.

    I walked in the freezing rain to his house, passing many pesestrians worried with their own troubles.

    Nothing in my old life had ever made me hate this much. Nor had it ever made me feel so numb. I was alone.

    That was all. Me and me only.

    Would anyone ever hear me.?

    See me??

    Care to even look for me...?

    What was I thinking? Following him around like this? He wouldn't notice..

    "Hey!!! Hey you!!!" A boy yelled as he ran straight towards me.

    I moved to the side to let him pass but he stopped before me.

    "Ive been looking for you!!!" He yelled harshly.

    "Where the-" He restrained himself.
    "Where have you been!!?"

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  5. Bump!!!!!
     
  6. BUMP


    I DON'T LIKE MY GRANDMA


    SHES BULL....
     
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    "Uhh-Can you?" I stuttered in deep confusion.

    "Yes!!!! Gabriel sent me to watch you!!" His blue eyes sparkled into mine, despite the anger in his voice.

    "Gabriel?"

    "Dont you read the Bible!? The Angel!! I'm your gaurdian until you complete your unfinished buisness."

    I flushed. I was taken back by his sturdy frame and golden skin. He was an angel, for sure. He was sparkling. Golden almost. He was flawless.

    I was not infatuated by any means, but he was gorgeous.

    "Unfinished??"

    "Yes. I've been trying to find you Jane. You need to move on from whatevers holding you back here. "

    "I don't know what that is?"

    "Find out."

    "Hmmmph."

    I walked from him. I wasn't in the mood to deal with a huge jerk. I really just wanted mike back.

    "Mike.." I whispered.

    "The guy who killed you?"

    "It was an accident!!!!!" I yelled and stormed away.

    "Look! I'm needing you to come with me. Heaven needs another angel." He smiled.

    "In going to get him to see me- whether you help or not!!!"

    "Him."

    "What?!? Mike has nothing to do with this!"

    "Hes you're unfinished buisness.."

    "Wha-"

    "Come with me!!! I'll fix this!!!"

    He grabbed my arm and we were suddenly in Mikes Bedroom.

    "You have one hour." He said as he slowly disappeared.

    There he was... The love of my life...
    My Mike. Sleeping deeply and cozily under my fuzzy purple blanket I gave him.

    I didn't know what he meant by 'one hour'and I didn't care.

    I slowly sat down on Mikes bed and stroked his head.

    "Mike... I love you."

    He stirred awake suddenly, with a drowsy yawn. His eyes barely opened to look at me.



    "Jane...?"

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  8.  Bump!  So sweet!
     
  9. ᏰᏌᎷᎵ or I'll cry!!  jk but I love this story!! 
     
  10. Aww Im glad yall like it
     
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    BUMP!!!
     
  12. Oh my god bump please!!! 