I like what your doing with the story especially Armani, I would be ***t scared if I was sat their knowing what he said and hes just sat smiling at you. Good work
O and I like the way raven just stands up and says he's going to be an uncle, it made me laugh for some reason.
The next nine months were agonizing, impatient, glorious, a little gross, hectic, amazing. But it happened and I'm now sat here in a chair next to the bed where Taylor sleeps holding my hour old baby boy. His name is Chase he has Taylor's gorgeous blue eyes and my dirty blond hair. I love him so much already and I know he's gonna amount to so much. The moon is full, the silver luminosity of it is breath taking, reminds me of Taylor. She stirred in her bed, even after having sweat and been through loads of pain shes still the most gorgeous girl ever. Her eyes opened as she gazed and smiled sleepily at me. "Come here baby" she whispered. I cautiously walked over with baby Chase in my strong arms. I laid down beside her, she stroked Chase's hair. "I'll put him in the cot" I stood up and slowly laid him down on the soft sheet. Taylor was suddenly behind me, I turned round to face her. I kissed her soft lips, she held my waist and hugged me so tight I could barely breath. She was strong but I was stronger! I lifted her up and dropped her on the bed. We changed giggling and fell asleep holding each other.