Night Watchers

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Cherry1313, May 17, 2012.

  1. Wait they were siblings?!
     
  2. Yeah but I never put that in the actual story
     
  3. I walked out of the door, Armani met me round the corner. "You're awake!" he exclaimed. I moved past him knowing he would follow. "Yes back from the so called dead I guess"I laughed at the flabbergasted expression on his face. Shay bounded down the corridor, slipping his arm round me. I walked into the main room and asked Shay to stay here. "I just want to catch up with my best friend ok?" I slipped his arm off me.
    " Sure. But I'll call hideout."he replied I know he wanted me to stay. I walked out to the sofa room. Armani hugged me close. Suddenly without warning he kissed me…
     
  4. Does anyone even read this?
     
  5. I read some of It
     
  6. Some? You gotta read the whole thing
     
  7. I'll read the whole thing later
     
  8. Hmm I've got a plot that will keep you readers on the edge of your seats
     
  9. You can read my smash up so far if you want to Cherry, it's called The Lie and Love Doesn't last forever.
     
  10.  wait, like, blow me away?
    Sky doesn't not want to wait so long......
     
  11. Aww I really want to hear some comments so that I can write the next bit
     
  12. Omg!!! I love this story please check mine out "Thirst for blood or something bigger?"
     
  13. Who wants an update?!
     
  14. "Get off me! You bastard!" I screamed. Just as Shay entered the room I slapped him straight round the face. "Armani what the fuck did you do?"Shay cried.
    "I…I…I kissed her" he breathed.
    Shay shook with anger, his eyes stone cold. Suddenly he punched Armani round the face. He passed out…

    Shay POV

    I lied on our bed with Taylor, stroking her hair. She cried into my chest, she felt violated and betrayed. "Shhh it's ok sweetheart. I'm here, I'm not leaving. Ever." I spoke to her gently and softly. She looked up at me, her eyes so hurt and innocent. I hated that my dick head brother had done this to her, hurt her so bad. She kissed me. A scared desirable kiss.
    "I feel better now" she whispered…


    Armani POV

    Dammit! Why am I such an asshole! I've lost Taylor, my best friend. My brother he would never forgive me for hurting her like that. What the hell have I done. I do wonder sometimes what Shay has that I don't. Why couldn't she pick me instead of him?
     
  15. Should Shay and Taylor leave to fend by themselves? Should Armani leave? Should Shay and Taylor forgive Armani? Should they all hold their peace and hope it will go away?

    WHAT DO YOU THINK SHOULD HAPPEN?!
     
  16. I'm asking all my readers by the way!
     
  17. Pick one Boston or I won't be able to continue