Night Watchers

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Cherry1313, May 17, 2012.

  1. Wow.!! it's getting better! ;D
     
  2. Yeah I thought it would be interesting to bring in a crappy brother but theres a lot more to meet in the warehouse
     
  3. Shay POV


    " Darling I'm sorry come here, look at me. Raven is jealous of you, I think you know that. I mean look at you gorgeous boyfriend, fantastic hunter, killing machine, smart beautiful. Honestly, Raven just needs to find his place and once he does I'm sure your relationship will get better" I wanted to take her hurt away, she didn't deserve such an unforgiving brother. "Thank you Shay. I wonder if he'll ever forgive me?". Suddenly there was a knock at the door. Taylor wiped her tears and shouted: Come in!
    " Hey Princess. Give me a hug?" Armani outstretched his arms. This is my brother. Ever since me and Taylor got together they became best friends, of course I was the first on she'd go to for anything. But Armani's been like a brother to her, a brother that actually acted like he loved her. I liked to see the two of them like that, it made me sure that Armani wouldn't mind a sister in-law. " Armani! Sure!" Taylor threw herself in his arms, they were about the same height 5'8. He had blond hair that went down as a front fringe. He grinned at me and said "I'm not even gonna ask what you two did last night " Taylor flipped him on to the ground, a knife against his throat. "You better not!" Taylor whispered. Quickly she burst out laughing and fell back in to my arms again, just the way I liked her. "See ya later love birds, don't make to much noise at night!" he laughed out before we could scream at him.

    Taylor POV

    "Shay?" I whispered.
    "Yes sweetheart?" he replied.
    "Hold me." I ordered. He wrapped his arms around my waist and nuzzled in to my chest. I lifted his chin, just to look at him. But I knew he wanted more, he pressed his hands hard against my back and moved himself up towards my face. I kissed him passionately, it burned through my veins, the most incredible feeling. Soon after he pulled back (unwillingly) someone, probably Sierra screamed LUNCH! The five of us emerged in to the main room.
     
  4. Love it bump bumpy bump
     
  5. RIGHT READERS WHO DO U PREFER ARMANI OR SHAY?
     
  6. I would say shay because I have read more about him. But you could do some kind of twist, but that's up to you if you want one. Keep it up 
     
  7. Me too Shay is real love Armani isn't loved in a romantic way by Taylor its vice versa
     
  8. BTW I'm changing the colour of Shays hair to dirty blond
     
  9. Shay groaned against my neck."I don't want any Sierra, give mine to Erin." he whined, then looked at me grinning."You wanna stay here with me? No one will hear us, the main room is seven rooms away." his hand gripped the top of my thigh.
    "No I wanna go eat lunch with a bunch of people I don't love"I whispered sarcastically. "Course I wanna stay with you!" I shouted. "Good, coz my hands can't stay off of you for much longer" he giggled...


    Sorry short update can't write much because I have henna on my hands from an activity I did with my friend she's a Muslim so she organized it will update later today
     
  10. This. Is. AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE
    Bumpies :3
     
  11. Shay POV

    Oh my god! I'm lying here, naked, in a bed with my fantastic girlfriend in my arms! Shes just so beautiful, I stared at her hair flowing out behind her, tickling my chest. She was amazing, I mean WOW factor! I'm so lucky. Quickly I fell asleep, stroking her hair...


    My eyes fluttered open, to see her gorgeous face, propped up on her elbow. " Morning Shag face" she grinned. "Hey babe!"I caressed her face with my hands, lovingly. She emerged from the bed, my eyes watched her amazing body. I stood up and wrapped my arms around her from behind. My hands followed her scars. She giggled happily"Stop, you know I'm ticklish!" she squealed.
    "I don't care" I ran my fingers through her dark, silky hair.


    Will finish later a bit restless today
    BTW theyre are seven characters in this warehouse Taylor(MAIN), Shay(MAIN), Raven(main Taylor's brother), Armani(main Shays brother and Taylor's best friend), Sierra(main lost all family) and Erin(Finn's sister main) Finn(Erin's brother main)
    MAIN=most important
    main= main character but not the most important
    P.S. you haven't met Finn yet what do you think he should be like? I was thinking quiet and mysterious but what's your ideas?
     
  12. Quiet, mysterious, secretive, fierce, strong :3
     
  13. Thank you that's an absolutely perfect description but I like to think of myself as Taylor lol so I'll always make sure shay is the bravest strongest ect.
     
  14. Hmm I have writers block what d'you think should happen next readers?
     
  15. I have an idea, but it would change a few things 
     
  16. Cool Story Br0!:) hahaha
     
  17. Shoot Boston I can always edit and re write parts
     
  18. Well can i hear it anyway